tpo 40
The topic of the article as well as the lecture is about maintaining a permenant human presence on the space; many scientists believe that it is possible to have such a presence on the Moon or March. The author states three theories to suggests that life is impossible on Venus. However, the lecturer provides a number of counterarguments in their rejection, and suggests a solution: establishing a float station that is 45 kilometers above the surface of the Venus.
Initially, the writer asserts that as a result of the high atmospheric pressure on the surface of the Venus, about 10 times of the Earth's atmospheric pressure, any object that had landed on its surface, crushed whitin an hour. In contrast, the the speaker says that by performing his suggestion, at 45 kilometers above the surface of the Venus, the atmospheric pressure is equal to the Earth's surface atmospheric pressure and it does not hurt any object.
Second, the author explains that because of the composition of the Venus's atmosphere, that mainly comprise of carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and sulfric acid, it is hard to establish a permanent station there without any oxygen or water. Yet again, the lecturer underscores that the floating station could obtain water and oxygen from the gasses on the Venus's surface.
The final point of disagreements between the reading and the listening passage is the sunlight. The writer believes that because of blockage effects of the thick layer of the clouds on the Venus's atmosphere, hardly can any light reaches its surface. On the other hand, the speaker states that those thick clouds are about the 40 kilometers high, and the floating station in the 45 kilometers height can reach enough sunlight, both dircetly from sun and from reflected light.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...e, crushed whitin an hour. In contrast, the the speaker says that by performing his sug...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...e, crushed whitin an hour. In contrast, the the speaker says that by performing his sug...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...n of the Venuss atmosphere, that mainly comprise of carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and sulfric a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, well, in contrast, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 293.0 270.72406181 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0614334471 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74077371508 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515358361775 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7657739834 49.2860985944 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.3 110.228320801 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3 21.698381199 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06452816374 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327764309465 0.272083759551 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116444578988 0.0996497079465 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431025709988 0.0662205650399 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175590344879 0.162205337803 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150271647829 0.0443174109184 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.3589403974 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.8541721854 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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