TPO 52
In this set of materials, the reading passage discusses that some people beliefs that elephants behaviors are surprising and mysterious and provide several reasons to support this idea. While in the listening the professor casts doubt on what presented in the text and believes that elephants are just fascinating but these three reasons are not acceptable.
First of all, in the text, it is clearly mentioned that elephants are aware of approaching death. However, the professor claims that elephants breaking off to herd to death alone do not make sense. She says that when elephants become old they practically have difficulty for foraging with others, thus they stay near water where food is more available to eat.
In addition, the professor disagrees with this idea that representing objects through art by elephants. She says that elephants have very sensitive ears and the trainer touches the animal's ears and used it to teach painting to them also they touch elephants ears to force them repeating the paint, Therefore, representing objects by elephants is not convincing.
Finally, in the text, it is stated that the elephant afraid from mice an small mammal. The professor subscribes that elephants fear mice because mice are unfamiliar to them. For example, elephants that present in the zoo do not afraid mice because they are familiar with mice.
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- T P O 53 3
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- Governments should spend more money in support of arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ated that the elephant afraid from mice an small mammal. The professor subscribes ...
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[8]
Message: The adjective afraid is used with 'of': 'afraid of mice'.
Suggestion: afraid of mice
...lephants that present in the zoo do not afraid mice because they are familiar with mice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1373.03311258 84% => OK
No of words: 221.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19457013575 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61967113382 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58371040724 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8610248696 49.2860985944 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.8 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06452816374 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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