tpo36
The lecture and reading are both about cloud seeding, which a method is used to reduce hail by spraying silver iodide on the strom clouds. The professor disagrees with the concepts which are mentioned in the reading for the following reasons.
first of all, the trouble of the laboratory experiments. the teacher says that although it is true that silver iodide reduces the snow forming, it could impact on the rain. if the rain is reduced, the water will lack. As a result, the dry will happen. On the other hand, the reading states that the silver iodide reduces hail production.
Secondly, the issue of the evidence from Asia. The professor mentions that when they spray This chemical material in Asia. They have a result because they used this material in the urban area. moreover, the cities have a different response for the cloud seeding due to the pollution. Also, the chemical reaction between the iodide and the pollution product will pass in different ways. As a result, cloud seeding does not work in the city.
Finally, the problem of the local studies. The lecturer asserts that using seeding clouds could reduce the damage in one area. He says that when they used it. all areas are reduced in the rain that means the natural variation might happen because using seeding cloud could not impact on many areas. However, the passage says that the cloud seed reduce the damage of the hail
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...ing for the following reasons. first of all, the trouble of the laboratory e...
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Suggestion: The
... trouble of the laboratory experiments. the teacher says that although it is true t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...w forming, it could impact on the rain. if the rain is reduced, the water will lac...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...y used this material in the urban area. moreover, the cities have a different response f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as a result, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 242.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85950413223 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20165351302 2.5805825403 85% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 145.348785872 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51652892562 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.23620309051 170% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.440068198 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3333333333 110.228320801 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4444444444 21.698381199 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06452816374 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.3589403974 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.8541721854 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.2367328918 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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