TPO41-Power Plant rules
The reading passage is mainly about addaptation some strict rules to protect the environment from coal ash. While representatives of power companies believe these strict rules not essential, the professor in the lecture firmly assert these rules should be adobt for the following reasons.
First, the reading passage states that, the most importang rule like using liner has done by power companies, and by liners coal ash components can not seep into the soil and contaminating the environment. In contrast, the professor in the lecture rejects this idea, and she further explains that, liners are not sufficient. In addition, liners are used only in new pond or landfill, and it is not require to old pond and landfill, so it has significant damage. Besides, coal ash components leak to drink water.
Second, considering the reading passage, representatives believe that, with these strict rules, consumers will get worry about using recycle product, and they convinced buy them. In contrary, the professor gives an example to explain this idea. she talks about Mercury as a dangerous material with these strict rules to handle and store. Also, it has recycled for 50 years, and consumers buy it too.
Third, the writer makes point that, with this rules the cost . On the other hand, the professor says that, of implementing strict rules will increased over 15 billion dollarsaltought the cost will increase, but it worth because the cost of electricity will become 1 precnet, and it is not much for having a clear environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
... in new pond or landfill, and it is not require to old pond and landfill, so it has sig...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 246, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
... gives an example to explain this idea. she talks about Mercury as a dangerous mate...
^^^
Line 13, column 42, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...hird, the writer makes point that, with this rules the cost . On the other hand, the...
^^^^
Line 13, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...kes point that, with this rules the cost . On the other hand, the professor says t...
^^
Line 13, column 142, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
...that, of implementing strict rules will increased over 15 billion dollarsaltought the cos...
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Line 13, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot much for having a clear environment.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, third, while, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 250.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.176 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74931576268 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.51434878587 462% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5550475692 49.2860985944 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.833333333 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06452816374 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319790395057 0.272083759551 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11160479601 0.0996497079465 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779761877097 0.0662205650399 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180575773044 0.162205337803 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680391122353 0.0443174109184 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.