In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
Of late there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that cashless society is the one in which people use more credit or debit cards, instead of relying on cash in their wallets. Some people opine that this is the welcomming trend for certain crimes. Critics, however, claim that it’s advantages triumph over disadvantages. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the merits and demerits of this statement.
At the outset there are myriad of arguements associated with cashless society and the usage of credit cards in daily life. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stem from the fact that credit or debit card is an easy access for every person, specially for students and office employees. As a prime example, according to the recent survey from the department of criminal investigation, crime rate has redued to 70 percent for credit or debit card snatching. Therefore, it’s an easy access for every one to carry every where without any fear of snatching or lost bacause in these circumtances people can promptly block their cards on temporary or permanent basis just on one phone call.
On the other hand, another pivotal facet pertaining to this arguement is that credit or debit cards always require swiping machine to use for any particular purpose. Thus, in several places these cards are not accepted for low cost items and non availibility of swiping machines. But this statement does not hold fully water.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that merits of credit or debit cards in this cashless society always triumps over demerits. Thus ideas that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15808823529 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61241370033 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7662068146 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.923076923 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208312854159 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074333774336 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596466961545 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134597613791 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08395473877 0.0609392437508 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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