In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
Recently, cashless society has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?". Whereas it is a widely held view that it is not highly beneficial, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the environmental standpoint, cash payments are bound up inextricably with deforestation, which indicates they lead to both cutting tree and making paper. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between paper money and nature conservation as well as an exponential increase in air pollution. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of money making is correlated positively with not only bank note but also cheque card.
Within the realm of economy, without the slightest doubt, international trend attribute to electronic banking, in that it would come down to cashless, foreign currency, and credit card. A salient example of such attribution is bank loan, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take annals budget for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint cash trading problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to band account, society demand, and even world market. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of easy and availability of bank card.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the advantages of cashless society are outweigh its disadvantages. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66315789474 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20135013069 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 139.433497537 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680701754386 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0190496256 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.153846154 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133773955099 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036815091594 0.0925447433944 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653207806812 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847348435502 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080116133072 0.0609392437508 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 55.0591133005 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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