In developing countries, tourism has disadvantage or advantages.
Tourism industry is crucial for many developing countries as it helps them to progress and step forward. Some people believe that tourism industry has so many disadvantages. While others argue that there is numerous advantage of tourism industry. This essay will discuss both merits and demerits of tourism in developing countries and provide plausible conclusion.
To commence with, the first and foremost benefits of tourism to developing country is that it contributes in economic growth as it brings foreign currency and promotes local businesses. More tourists mean more hotels, more services which means more employment for the people in country. It also helps country to strengthen their bond and improve their relationship with other countries. For example, Nepal, the Himalayan nation’s much income comes from tourism and it boosts local hospitality industry significantly. Therefore, tourism industry brings several advantages to developing countries.
On the flip side, there are many developing countries are not safe for tourists and tourists are not welcomed there and face language and cultural disputes which eventually harm country’s reputation and raising question on their safety measures. For instance, recently a Japanese and an Italian tourist were shot dead in Bangladesh by the “Islamic State Tourism Group”. So, some developing countries don’t have solid security measures and such type of incidents tarnish the country’s reputation.
In conclusion, the forgoing discussion propounds the view that the positive side of tourism outweigh the negative side and it’s clearly predicted that in future tourism will reach to new heights by contributing much to the country’s economy and unite the countries across the globe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82129277567 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98974909678 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596958174905 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.563195044 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.769230769 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217274588874 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985325817269 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750902916669 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140839249453 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628522512294 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 11.5310837438 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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