It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. Some people believe that the year off is a waste of time while others believe that it is necessary.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
In recent years, students are immensely taking a year off right after they finish school; consequently, they end up planning well for their future which helps them a lot. It can also have some negative impact as well. This essay will discuss it is cause and effects, moreover, will recommend some suggestions on this topic as well.
Firstly, students can lack behind from their peers and can find themselves in a situation where their fellow class mates are ahead of them not only in terms of academic studies but also in their professional career. Apart from that, in some cases, an individual can go into depression if longer breaks are taken on regular basis. Therefore, the students will always see their friends ahead of them.
On the other hand, having a one year break can actually be helpful and refreshing sometimes. Consequently, an individual can start the university with fresh mind which can help them stay more energized at the start of the university. It is also important to highlight that students can also complete any of their unfinished work which they were not able to fulfill in the past, therefore, it is very important to plan their holidays accordingly. Additionally, spending quality time with friends and family can also be added advantage.
In conclusion, in my opinion, individuals can benefit more if they continue their studies without a one year off, therefore, I would strongly recommend taking short breaks rather than long breaks especially right after finishing school.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0843373494 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65610964929 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614457831325 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0949673977 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.090909091 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.7272727273 7.25397266985 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124668708103 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539142946204 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419807413902 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833374086783 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390849842917 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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