Standardized testing, where all students in an education system are tested and compared, is widely used. Some people argue that too much testing is taking place and the tests are destroying creativity.
Discuss the extent to which you are agree or disagree. Support your point of view with reasons or examples.
In a competitive world like ours, where population is huge and lucrative jobs are few, the standardized testing is done where all students in an education system are tested and compared. According to me it is a good way of evaluating a person.
The students across the world are studying almost the same subjects like Literature, Mathematics, Science, Social studies, Business studies, etcetera. In such scenario, it is important to judge the best amoung the rest. The standardized testing in such competitive environment helps in evaluating students. This in turn helps them to stay competitive in their future life and stay ahead of the ever growing competition as the competition is in every sphere, for example, nations compete with each other, sports stars compete with each other, economies are compared, employees are evaluated etcetera.
We have to be practical about the fact that the resourses in the planet earth are not infinite, and the egalitarianism does not exist in our society. Therefore, comparisons are inevitable. And I strongly disagree that competition kills creativity. In today's competitive world there are many creative people who have excelled in their respective fields like J. K. Rowling and G. R. R. Martin in writing, M. F. Hussain in painting, Christopher Nolan in film making etcetera. In fact, all these legends have only benefited from the constant evaluation they have faced. Without competition the world would be dull and there would be no concept of greatness as the greatness comes from being better than the rest.
In broad terms, the competition is vital in our ever growing world. Hence, it is necessary to prepare our children for their future competition from a young age so that they do not face troubles later.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1637630662 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85613562598 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.4841516702 50.4703680194 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1764705882 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 7.25397266985 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119248191456 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359273934216 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854124895561 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962440303739 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121149005064 0.0609392437508 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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