Studying at a good overseas university is better than studying at a university in your own country.
Choose whether you agree or disagree with this statement and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
The impact of studying abroad, which were always debatable, have now become more controversial. The substantial influence of studying from the overseas country has provoked a contention over the potential impact of this trend on students getting a degree from their own country. It can be agreed by many people that international academic qualification has positive impacts, however, others believe that it some negative impressions as well. This essay will elaborate that achieving a graduation degree from abroad could be immensely beneficial but I will explain my point by discussing both sides of the argument.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons why studying from can have a powerful impact on students career, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that an international degree is globally appreciated by numerous organizations. For example, students who have studied abroad get high paid jobs as compared to other students. And, also they have a plethora of job opportunities when they finish their qualification. Thus, huge salary benefits and availability of jobs can play a vital role.
On the other hand, some students adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that studying abroad could be significantly costly and uncomfortable as well. For example, students who study overseas have to pay a staggering amount of university fees as well as leave the comfort of being with their family. Hence high fee and comfort level can play a vital role for students who study abroad.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that studying from overseas has some profits but it has some drawbacks as well that should be well handled.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...the comfort of being with their family. Hence high fee and comfort level can play a v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19557195572 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85658910343 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575645756458 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4607293805 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156010479377 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594254243131 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466383795037 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994179668975 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230769326051 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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