Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that the tendency of negative news on the social network can causes damage for each person and all societies. I partially agree with this views; while it is may true in the some case but in term of positive senses, focusing on the problems and emergencies also bring some benefits for people as well as society.
There are some benefits of posting social problems on the media. Firstly, it offers citizens have real senses of their local area. Thus, they can avoid to troubles which are possibly evitable. For instance, when the warning crime or pickpocket was happened currently in the nearest area, everyone might will have methods to avoid from these problems when they have a roads or buses...,so on. Secondly, protecting security and safety at their country that are responsibility of authorities and all inhabitants. As a result, I believe that all people will give the measure in order to address this issues when people know exactly information on the internet and social network as well.
In spite of the benefits above, there are also some drawbacks which are considered serious problems. Firstly, people watch totally negative news too much that lead to be capable of fears and always live without belief each other. Furthermore, these problems and emergencies might affect directly to mental young people, because they can imitate bad behavior and consider that has been happened steadily and normally at their society. Secondly, societies seem to be more issues and less positive development, it can causes increasing migration at the country where has a lot of problems. Because people always find good accommodation and environment without concerning harmful to enjoy their life.
In conclusion, I suppose that the reports of media concentrate on negative issues instead of positive development can bring both benefits and drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20529801325 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65096781706 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559602649007 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2514671449 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.285714286 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179873192946 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604385031663 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640422155559 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119847716803 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507237681575 0.056905535591 89% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.