Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and what is wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
it has been believed that telling students what is positive and negative should be the responsibility for instructors thus, they can have good manners. other people say that teachers only be allowed to teach them academical matters. In my opinion, even though they can acquire more knowledge from their schoolteachers, I think it is better for them to get from their family to prevent attitude problems.
On the one hand, it is widely accepted that teachers play an important role in students future allows them to influence their chooses and affect them indirectly. Moreover, teachers can see what families cannot due to families education or their cultural condition and they change children lives with helping them. In some cases teachers closer than family because of not paying attention to their children. For example, Science Tokyo magazine stated in 2017 that due to overworking families, %65 of student talk their daily problems with their teacher to resolve.
On the other hand, due to differences in families or culture, instructors teaching could be mistaken which results in a poor connection between family and student, this situation leads to religion or cultural diversities in long-term. For instance, Mumbai News magazine revealed in 2015 that %75 of female student living in the village have a hard time to change their family minds to give permission for university instead of marrying early age. Not only affect family relationship but also affect self-confidence indirectly. students who select their own choose often have more social connections and the aftermath of this experience improve their working life more.
To sum up, although on some occasions teachers knowledge could affect students future life, I believe students should choose their options themselves and learn how to behave from their parents
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33793103448 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69998018225 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9565401905 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270419165438 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112154692257 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823518330168 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184510734409 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814366261626 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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