43. The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
With the development of technology, the pace of life is being faster and faster. This quick speed of life is like a double-edged sword, it can both solve and cause the problem. Between these two opinions, I agree with the claim that the increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Granted, the quick pace of life solves some problems, instead of causing the problem. Communication speed is one of the factors that is being faster with the increasing pace of life. Because the people can contact to others anytime, anywhere they want, they can get help in many aspects such as getting additional information or releasing mental stress. Especially in heavy stress circumstances, just small chitchat with his or her friend can be helpful to relieve the stress. This is being possible with the fast pace of life. Thus, the rapid pace of life can solve some problems in few aspects.
However, the quick pace of life causes a problem in the aspect of the generation gap. Even though there was not a substantial difference in the lifestyle between the elder and the young in the past, there is a substantial difference between the elder and the young in the present due to the fast speed of life. This difference causes the conflict between two generations, namely the generation gap, which is the big social problem nowadays. Therefore, the rapid pace of life cause the problem in case of the generation gap.
In addition, the quick pace of life even makes our life desolate. With the increasing speed of life, people lost their time to care about other people. They are so busy that they only can concern about their work only. Sometimes, a few greetings to other unknown people can be surprisingly helpful to make others happy. Nowadays, due to the busy life of the people, short greetings are being harder and harder. Accordingly, the rapid pace of life make our life more desolate, which have an adverse effect to people’s life.
In perspective of the communication, generation gap, and desolate life, I agree with the claim that the problem caused by the increasingly quick speed of life today is more than solved. I believe that just a bit of slowdown in the pace of life can make people’s life happier than before.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
With the development of technology, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 389.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84318766067 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62553584093 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434447300771 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9050324667 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7142857143 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5238095238 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.19047619048 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234919624208 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961872579237 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756480023252 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168622498392 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609836228512 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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