earth is being harmed by human activity
Earth is only one livable planet in which we live comfortably. Personally I believe that human activity is cause of damage earth. I feel this way for two reasons which I explore in the following essay.
First of all, earth is going to be damage day by day. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. In 2005, my town was very clean and nice. at that time we can drunk water directly. In 2006, the soil company, bricks factory were open in that place. Nowadays, my place is very dirty, river is black, pure water is yellow and we can't drink the underground water directly, place is noisy too. nowadays people feel hard to live there and the environment is not good for health.
Secondly, people cut the trees for their own propose that's why oxygen going to less and carbondioxied is in high level. trees are less because of the a lot of factories open. For instance, in capital city Kathmandu of Nepal, we can easily see the dust every side, smell of air is so bed, the popular river Bagmati is very black. If we go outside for 1 hour we return at home with dirty hair and clothes. This is all because the human activity.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that earth is being danger condition by human activity. This is because they cut trees and they open a lot of factories.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: At
... 2005, my town was very clean and nice. at that time we can drunk water directly. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'drink' or 'be drunk'?
Suggestion: drink; be drunk
...ery clean and nice. at that time we can drunk water directly. In 2006, the soil compa...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r is black, pure water is yellow and we cant drink the underground water directly, p...
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Suggestion: Nowadays
...und water directly, place is noisy too. nowadays people feel hard to live there and the ...
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Suggestion: that's
...ple cut the trees for their own propose thats why oxygen going to less and carbondiox...
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Suggestion: Trees
...ess and carbondioxied is in high level. trees are less because of the a lot of factor...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...n high level. trees are less because of the a lot of factories open. For instance, in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 239.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42677824268 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36502736941 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602510460251 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4808168033 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.2352941176 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0588235294 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16190928288 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589640552023 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106966475211 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118934556296 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798188046679 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 11.7677419355 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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