As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
this topic raises the controversial issue whether "as people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate". different people may have different positions on this topic. we cannot generalize about the truth. however, in my perspective I am consonant with this topic.
one reason for my belief is that, nowadays we often use calculator to solve simple problems or simple addition/ subtraction. this habit is cause of deteriorate our thinking skill. we cannot solve simple problems without calculator. for example- often students are used to calculator for multiplying 12 and 2 nowadays, they not remember the table of 12 or they forget the multiples of 12 because of calculator.
another reason for my belief is that, nowadays we use google for searching problems, for searching meaning. this is another reason to deteriorate our ability of thinking. we can find the solution of hard problems also, in google, that make us easy and may save our time also, but we not try ourselves to solve the problems, which is serious issue to put down our ability of thinking.
perhaps the best reason is, now a days we use the grammar aap which aap correct the meaning automatically. I believe that, if we use that aap we forget the correct meaning of simple words or we cannot try hard to remember the meaning of words. for example- now adays many people write "u" for "you", "thanku" for "thank you", "yr" for "year" etc. and we forget the real meaning of that words.
the examples above all support the idea that we find that, technology reduce the thinking ability of human mind. ultimately, after considering both sides of the issue, it must be concluded that, as people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 316.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15189873418 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05889421862 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481012658228 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.3841519991 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7647058824 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58823529412 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23620245936 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776748536441 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10828778597 0.0758088955206 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15900441174 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10853834712 0.0667264976115 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.