In order for any work of art—for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song—to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.

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In order for any work of art—for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song—to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.

this issue, In order for any work of art—for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song—to have merit, it must be understandable to most people, is highly controversial. different people may have different opinion about tis recommendation. the general fact of this topic is limited. we can't generalize about this topic. however i am not totally agree with this topic. I have ambiguous thought about this recommendation.
Firstly i believe that, we are watching more english film, movies, we listening plentiful english songs to learning english language and english words pronounces. when new film is going to realize in film theater, then many people go to watching that movies without understanding about the film and film producer earn money on those days. if film is good then people watch repeating, if not then people give advice also to not watch this movie after understanding about film.
second reason I believe that, some movies represent as tacit or implied, which we can't understand properly but we enjoy to seeing those movies and trying to understand also. many songs have only tune and we love that melodious tone, like harmonium, piano. in country India some people learning and teaching sastriya sangit. which is very beautiful. but we cant totally understand, but we feel so good to watching those type of dance, listening those type of song. and the film director or singer earn good money also.
third reason for my belief is that, if we understanding deeply any songs or poem or films and we like that then we watch or listen more and more times which is directly proportional to the merit of that songs or films or poem. if we can feel euphoria or rest or cool then only the film is going to superhit.
All above example prove that, understanding of people not totally hamper to earn money and popularity. ultimately it concludes that film art popularity or merit is depends upon the goodness or quality, only understanding is not affected to have merit.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, then, third, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 338.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87869822485 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7010278833 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.7513535475 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7894736842 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328565621158 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986460448333 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187364488515 0.0758088955206 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187715291756 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104052965084 0.0667264976115 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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