Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Celebrities, one of the symbols of the modern world, has widespread effects on society in recent years. A controversial question, which is often raised in this regard, is that whether celebrities' influence on young people is more in comparison to the old people or not. Different people hold different perspectives, due to their previous experiences. As far as I am concerned, I am of the opinion that the impact of celebrities’ opinions on youngsters is immense and indisputable in comparison to old people. In the following paragraph, I will delve into some reasons and examples to illustrate my view.
The first noteworthy reason coming to my mind is that the media choose celebrities to set an example for the young generation. Since young people are easily attracted by appearances, media have shown countless programs including celebrities’ luxurious lifestyle, their expensive care, penthouse, and precious jewelry. Moreover, the TV channels and other sources of spreading news are filled with programs and news that admired them for various subjects. All these are very convincing and attractive for the young generation to be under celebrities' influence. For instance, we can see in our society how young followers of famous singers or actresses tend to imitate their behavior and outfit. My younger sister wears an outfit like Lady Gaga and copies her way of speaking and behavior.
Another exquisite point to be mentioned is that since older people have reached a high level of maturity, they are able to distinguish the real actions and behavior from manipulative tricks and attention-grabbing words, visual appeal. They have tasted a lot of bitter and sweet experiences related to this issue which have given them a logical view. When they see celebrities’ behavior, they are able to find out the facts behind their charming and innocent behavior. As a result, it is difficult for celebrities to attract older people as loyal followers. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Last year, one of the famous actresses advertised a product that persuaded me to buy it. In spite of my mother’s warns, I bought it because my celebrity idol advertised it, and then realized it was a fake product.
To summarize, from what has been discussed, it is crystal clear that the celebrities’ point of view has a vivid impact on young people. The first reason that mentioned in the media persuade young people to choose celebrities as a role model. In addition, older people are enough mature to be not fooled by celebrities' attention-grabbing words and innocent appearance.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in addition, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15876777251 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07132865055 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552132701422 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7294135856 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0952380952 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90476190476 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21216745262 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618639510152 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415228176961 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133852101333 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265800567172 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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