On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals.
The argument claims that the moped is the popular form of transportation in Balmer and during
summer 100,000 people increase and the are many accident cases occurs so, we will increase the
rent of vehicle, that reduce the accident because same strategy apply on Seaville island.
Stated in this way the argument fails to mentions several key points basis on which it could be
evaluated. The conclusion relies on assumption for which, there is no clear evidence, so
conclusion can be unsubstantiated and unsupproted.
First of all, The argument readily assumes that the In Balmer Island, moped is the popular form
of transportation, the population increases 100,000 during the summer months and accidents
cases are increase. This is merely an assumption without much solid ground. Here, the author
assumes that the during summer population increase and the people who comes in summer they are
responsible for this accidents. It is also possible there are other reason like roads are not
properly because of the rush of the many peoples. Also people does not follow traffic rule and
consequently accidents cases are increase.
Seconds, The argument readily assumes that if Balmer island should limit the number of mopeds
rented by thew island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer
season than accident cases reduces. This is again weak and unsupported claim as a does not
demonstrate any correlation between rent and accident cases. For example, some people came
during summer in Balmer they are rich people, so those people also take a mopeds as rent and
there is does not effect of 25 plus money increase. For example in Balmer rich people
responsible for many accidents than this strategy of the town council become fail.
Lastly, limiting number of rentals, neighboring island reduce the 50 percent cases so, this
strategy also works in Balmer island. This is again unpersuasive argument. Consider the example
there are 1000 people in Seaville island during summer and 500 cases reduce. Now other hand
there are 10,000 people in Balmer island during summer, so we can not sy that there are 5000
cases reduces in Balmer island. Also there is lot of factors affect for example, in Balmer
there are many people come in summer but in Seaville the population is as it is. so we can not
said that this strategy effective in Balmer island. However, careful scrutiny of the evidence
reveals the little credible support for the author argument with respect to several critical
factors and raises several skeptical questions. Without the answer of this questions the reader
left with impression that the claims made by the author are more wishful rather than
substantive.
In conclusion, The author's conclusion unpersuasive as its stands. To bolster it further the
author must provide better concrete examples. It could be considerably strengthened if author
mention all relevant facts. In order to asses the merit of several situation it is essential
to have good knowledge about the contributing factors. As a result the authors conclusion has a
no legs to stands.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 510 350
No. of Characters: 2537 1500
No. of Different Words: 223 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.752 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.975 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.519 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 211 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 125 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.199 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.302 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.5 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.101 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
hey, essay-erater why you not
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You provide score 3.0 so, I
You provide score 3.0 so, I expecte that I will got same score ? How is the accuracy of the e-gradder as comapre to score provide by ets ?
If we give it 3.0, most
If we give it 3.0, most likely ETS will get it around 3.0, 3.5 or 2.5 in actual test. Not exactly the same mark as in actual score.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ing summer 100,000 people increase and the are many accident cases occurs so, we will ...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 42, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'mention'.
Suggestion: mention
...tated in this way the argument fails to mentions several key points basis on which it co...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...mes in summer they are responsible for this accidents. It is also possible there ar...
^^^^
Line 12, column 51, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ecause of the rush of the many peoples. Also people does not follow traffic rule and...
^^^^
Line 15, column 84, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...es from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season than accident cases reduces. This is ag...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 18, column 73, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a moped' or simply 'mopeds'?
Suggestion: a moped; mopeds
... rich people, so those people also take a mopeds as rent and there is does not effect o...
^^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 19, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...a mopeds as rent and there is does not effect of 25 plus money increase. For example ...
^^^^^^
Line 25, column 33, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e 5000 cases reduces in Balmer island. Also there is lot of factors affect for exam...
^^^^
Line 25, column 62, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...er island. Also there is lot of factors affect for example, in Balmer there are many peop...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 27, column 1, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
... population is as it is. so we can not said that this strategy effective in Balmer ...
^^^^
Line 29, column 71, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ptical questions. Without the answer of this questions the reader left with impress...
^^^^
Line 32, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
... than substantive. In conclusion, The authors conclusion unpersuasive as its stands. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 34, column 60, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun situation seems to be countable; consider using: 'several situations'.
Suggestion: several situations
...t facts. In order to asses the merit of several situation it is essential to have good knowledge...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 35, column 56, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...owledge about the contributing factors. As a result the authors conclusion has a ...
^^
Line 35, column 72, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...e contributing factors. As a result the authors conclusion has a no legs to stands.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, lastly, second, so, then, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 28.8173652695 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 55.5748502994 103% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2648.0 2260.96107784 117% => OK
No of words: 510.0 441.139720559 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19215686275 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5874746357 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 204.123752495 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454901960784 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 806.4 705.55239521 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.22255489022 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 19.7664670659 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7306054965 57.8364921388 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.92 119.503703932 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 23.324526521 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64 5.70786347227 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 34.0 5.15768463074 659% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.20758483034 171% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358414341358 0.218282227539 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949039037787 0.0743258471296 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127743209679 0.0701772020484 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954714246874 0.128457276422 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104840941671 0.0628817314937 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 98.500998004 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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