The following appeared in a memo from the Mayor of the city of Hillview:
“In order to alleviate the serious unemployment problem in our town, we should encourage Autotech to build its automobile manufacturing plant in our area. The Hillview landfill, which has been undeveloped for decades, is a perfect site for this plant. The building and staffing of this plant will put to work thousands of Hillview residents left unemployed after Computech computer software programming company abandoned its national facility last year. I am asking the City Council to authorize a large campaign to attract the company and offer significant tax incentives to make our town attractive to this giant of car manufacturing.”
Hillview city council should authorize a large campaign to attract Autotech and should offer significant tax incentives to make Hillview attractive to this gian of car manufacturing. This is appeared in a memo from the Mayor of the city Hillview. To support there are reasons given in this memo. 1) Hillview city has serious unemoloyement problem. 2) Hillview landfill which has been undeveloped for decaded, is a perfect site for the company. 3) Autotech will alleviate the unemployement and will put to work thousand of Hillview residents. Certainly these information is not enough to support mayor. On the basis of these information I not believe on mayor's view.
First of all, Mayor said in the memo that unemployement is serious problem in Hillview and to solve this they should encourage Autotech to build its automobile manufacturing plant in their area. but there are some questions like Why the problem of unemployement in the Hillview? What are the reasons behind it? Will Autotech be able to solve these problems? Why we should enocurage Autotech not any other company? These questions are important to reach on any conclusion. As there may be a chance that unemployement problem is not because of lack of job but may be because of lack of skill in Hillviws's residants and this mayor could not solve by encouraging Autotech too build its plant in their area. Even there are chances that if Autotech will build its manufacturing unit still it will take employes from other city if Hillview people are not skilled in what they required. What are the skills of unemployed people of Hillview?
Further, Mayor said Hillview landfill is perfect site for this plant. Is it really perfect? Is it harming other industry or people of Hillview city? There are chnaces that Hillview's people are using this landfill for farming or may be for any other reason which have been taking part on their income. AS above I asked, Does people are eligible for job? Because if not then eventually if Autotech build its unit it will increase population as they employed people from outside of Hillview and which we effect Hillviews economy. Mayor said in even that last year Computech computer software programming company abondapned its national facility and left people unempoloyed. so Why was this happend? Is there any problam in national facility? What if Autotech will do the same? What precautions city council will take to prevent this?
In sum, Mayor has to provide firm support to prove his or her point. I would like to know 1) Reasons behind Computech computer software company abondoned Hillview. 2) What are the skills of Hillview people. 3) Landfill Total Details. And Other documents which i explained above.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 31 15
No. of Words: 453 350
No. of Characters: 2215 1500
No. of Different Words: 204 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.613 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.89 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.662 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 152 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 129 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 88 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.613 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.622 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.258 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.271 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.394 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.09 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...ousand of Hillview residents. Certainly these information is not enough to support mayor. On the ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...nough to support mayor. On the basis of these information I not believe on mayors view. First ...
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Suggestion: But
...bile manufacturing plant in their area. but there are some questions like Why the p...
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Message: Did you mean 'to build'?
Suggestion: to build
...could not solve by encouraging Autotech too build its plant in their area. Even there are...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...l facility and left people unempoloyed. so Why was this happend? Is there any prob...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...otal Details. And Other documents which i explained above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, so, still, then, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 28.8173652695 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 55.5748502994 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2262.0 2260.96107784 100% => OK
No of words: 453.0 441.139720559 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99337748344 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71066217534 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 204.123752495 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443708609272 0.468620217663 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.9 705.55239521 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 19.7664670659 167% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.8473053892 57% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.0059851489 57.8364921388 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5454545455 119.503703932 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.7272727273 23.324526521 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.9696969697 5.70786347227 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.20758483034 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.67664670659 321% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403370624653 0.218282227539 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10345142782 0.0743258471296 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101231413974 0.0701772020484 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253138977333 0.128457276422 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990195044187 0.0628817314937 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.3799401198 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 48.3550499002 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.197005988 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.5979740519 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 98.500998004 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 12.3882235529 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.1389221557 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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