The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie
Production Company.
“According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer
people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the
percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies
actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not
reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of
our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available.
Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the
public through advertising.”
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to
decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable.
Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the
recommendation.
There are seriously few problem with this recommendation. Without clearing the following questions, it will be hard to decide the recommendation.
Though percentage of positive reviews increased by specific Super Screen movies reviewers, we need to know about the percentage of negetive reviews. The percentabe of negetive reviews may also be increased. We need to be clear how many people gives negetive reviews. The contents of negetive review may contain about the actuall problem of Super Screen movies.
People may be become less interested about movies. We need to know people recent interest about movies.
Negetive reviews contents may contain the lack of quality is the actuall problem of less viewers of Super Screen movies.
Without knowing the facts of negetive reviews percentage and contents of negetive reviews it will not be possible to decide the recommendation to increase the budget for advertising.
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...ncrease the budget for advertising.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.6327345309 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 11.1786427146 9% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 13.6137724551 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 28.8173652695 21% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 55.5748502994 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 2260.96107784 35% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 144.0 441.139720559 33% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47916666667 5.12650576532 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 4.56307096286 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8528653427 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 204.123752495 35% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493055555556 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 705.55239521 34% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.8473053892 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8910247021 57.8364921388 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9 119.503703932 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 23.324526521 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 5.70786347227 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.074365521072 0.218282227539 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035851292749 0.0743258471296 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437735773947 0.0701772020484 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0434520054838 0.128457276422 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389771543465 0.0628817314937 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.3550499002 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 12.5979740519 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 98.500998004 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 12.3882235529 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.1389221557 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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