Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
The aforementioned argument is flawed for numerous reasons.Primarily, if Inoculations were given properly many lives might be saved does not hold always ture.Also, for small possibilty of death can not shut down the regular administration of the inoculations.The argument fails to provide extra information in this cases.
The argument fails to justify that giving inoculations against the cow flue at a regular basis might save the life of people.If the inoculation was not enough to prevent the cow flue, then it wouldn't be any good to use the innoculation.There could be some other factors regarding the breakout and spreading of diseases like with air, water etc.In that case,the claim fails to justfy that it might saved many lives.Had the administration found the only way to find a cow flue is to give inoculations,then the argument would be justified.
Next, as there is a small possibilty that a person will die if the inoculation is not given, the argument fails to tell that why regualar inoculations will not be permitted.If the inoculation is not given regularly, a person might be seriously harmed for the disease.Death can not only suggests the demand of inoculations.A permanent health damage of a partcular person will be more gruesome than death.Therefore, the reason for not permitting the regular inoculations is not clear.If there were reasons that taking an inoculation once could cure the cow flue, then the given claim is strengthened.
Finally, the argumnet fails to provide any information about the place where it is detected and the decision not admisnitrating inoculation properly.The place where the cow flue has been detected might requires the inoculations.On the other parts of the country there is no need to give inoculations regularly.If the information provided was clear enough to justify that there is no need for innoculations where the cow flue is not detected, then the claim is logical.
Overall, the argument can not relate the cause of not administering the inoculations regularly in the detected area or other areas of a country and fails to prove that how inoculations only might save many lives.Furthermore, the cause of not giving regular measures to stop the flue as there was no possibility of death is not quite logical.The claim fails to justify all of these reasons.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The aforementioned argument is flawed for numerous reasons.Primarily, if Inoculations were given properly many lives might be saved does not hold always ture.Also, for small possibilty of death can not shut down the regular administration of the inoculations.The argument fails to provide extra information in this cases.
Error: possibilty Suggestion: possibility
Error: ture Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The argument fails to justify that giving inoculations against the cow flue at a regular basis might save the life of people.If the inoculation was not enough to prevent the cow flue, then it wouldn't be any good to use the innoculation.There could be some other factors regarding the breakout and spreading of diseases like with air, water etc.In that case,the claim fails to justfy that it might saved many lives.Had the administration found the only way to find a cow flue is to give inoculations,
Error: inoculation Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: justfy Suggestion: justify
Error: breakout Suggestion: breakup
Error: etc Suggestion: et
Error: innoculation Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: wouldn Suggestion: would
Sentence: Next, as there is a small possibilty that a person will die if the inoculation is not given, the argument fails to tell that why regualar inoculations will not be permitted.If the inoculation is not given regularly, a person might be seriously harmed for the disease.Death can not only suggests the demand of inoculations.A permanent health damage of a partcular person will be more gruesome than death.Therefore, the reason for not permitting the regular inoculations is not clear.If there were
Error: inoculation Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: possibilty Suggestion: possibility
Error: regualar Suggestion: regular
Error: partcular Suggestion: particular
Sentence: reasons that taking an inoculation once could cure the cow flue, then the given claim is strengthened.
Error: inoculation Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Finally, the argumnet fails to provide any information about the place where it is detected and the decision not admisnitrating inoculation properly.The place where the cow flue has been detected might requires the inoculations.On the other parts of the country there is no need to give inoculations regularly.If the information provided was clear enough to justify that there is no need for innoculations where the cow flue is not detected, then the claim is logical.
Error: innoculations Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: inoculation Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: admisnitrating Suggestion: administration
Error: argumnet Suggestion: argument
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 10 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 396 350
No. of Characters: 1904 1500
No. of Different Words: 165 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.461 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.808 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.833 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 56.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 31.213 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.485 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.802 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.119 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Primarily
...argument is flawed for numerous reasons.Primarily, if Inoculations were given properly ma...
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Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'hold'.
Suggestion: always hold
...erly many lives might be saved does not hold always ture.Also, for small possibilty of deat...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...ight be saved does not hold always ture.Also, for small possibilty of death can not ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ular administration of the inoculations.The argument fails to provide extra informa...
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Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...t fails to provide extra information in this cases. The argument fails to justify...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...lar basis might save the life of people.If the inoculation was not enough to preve...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...enough to prevent the cow flue, then it wouldnt be any good to use the innoculation.The...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...dnt be any good to use the innoculation.There could be some other factors regarding t...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ng of diseases like with air, water etc.In that case,the claim fails to justfy tha...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...es like with air, water etc.In that case,the claim fails to justfy that it might sav...
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Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Had
...o justfy that it might saved many lives.Had the administration found the only way t...
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Line 3, column 499, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , then
... find a cow flue is to give inoculations,then the argument would be justified. Nex...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...alar inoculations will not be permitted.If the inoculation is not given regularly,...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Death
...ght be seriously harmed for the disease.Death can not only suggests the demand of ino...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'suggest'
Suggestion: suggest
...rmed for the disease.Death can not only suggests the demand of inoculations.A permanent ...
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Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...nly suggests the demand of inoculations.A permanent health damage of a partcular ...
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Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...person will be more gruesome than death.Therefore, the reason for not permitting the regu...
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Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...g the regular inoculations is not clear.If there were reasons that taking an inocu...
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Suggestion: The
...not admisnitrating inoculation properly.The place where the cow flue has been detec...
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...etected might requires the inoculations.On the other parts of the country there is...
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Line 7, column 311, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
... no need to give inoculations regularly.If the information provided was clear enou...
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Line 9, column 213, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...inoculations only might save many lives.Furthermore, the cause of not giving regular measur...
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Line 9, column 342, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ssibility of death is not quite logical.The claim fails to justify all of these rea...
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Line 9, column 391, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... fails to justify all of these reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.6327345309 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 55.5748502994 67% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 2260.96107784 87% => OK
No of words: 376.0 441.139720559 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20478723404 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32507547643 2.78398813304 119% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 204.123752495 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446808510638 0.468620217663 95% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 705.55239521 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.76447105788 148% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 22.8473053892 328% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.2141118995 57.8364921388 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 391.4 119.503703932 328% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.2 23.324526521 322% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.4 5.70786347227 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.25449101796 457% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279966196032 0.218282227539 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160172776928 0.0743258471296 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313586204899 0.0701772020484 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160172776928 0.128457276422 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313586204899 0.0628817314937 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.7 14.3799401198 283% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -13.11 48.3550499002 -27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.1628742515 254% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 12.197005988 276% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.5979740519 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.32208582834 127% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 98.500998004 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 12.3882235529 246% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 11.1389221557 287% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.9071856287 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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