Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The above paragraph argues whether inoculations against cow flu should be routinely administered or not. Inoculations plays a significant role in preventing a person from many diseases.It is a preemptive step which should be incorporated by each and every individual. This argument is rife with holes and rests on some unsubstantited assumptions and is unpersuasive as it stands.
The first line states that many lives could be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the diseases was detected. There is no evidence attached whether inoculations against cow flu would save the lives or not. The word many is also vague as there is no survey conducted to conclude regarding the number of people suffering from the disease.
The second line claims that there is a very small possibility that a person will die as a result of inoculations. This line is vague as it is not bolstered by proper research. It is very important to know whether people are dying because of inoculations or not. It states that there is a small possibility of a people dying which should be underscored as there is a possibility. In the era where technology is advancing day by day it is significant to know the cause of the deaths rather than relying on unsubstantiated assumptions.
The argument assumes that there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of inoculations. On the above assumptions the author claims that he cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely examined. It will be a big blunder if the regular administration is eschewed as more and more people could die because of inoculations.
Therefore it is necessary to attach detailed reports and documents regarding the death tolls by the disease. The above argument is not buttressed by any of the evidence and reports and hence it is considered to be flawed.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 319 350
No. of Characters: 1549 1500
No. of Different Words: 140 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.226 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.856 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.056 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 107 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.938 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.308 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.352 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.592 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.071 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dministered or not. Inoculations plays a significant role in preventing a person ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Significant
...stered or not. Inoculations plays a significant role in preventing a person from many d...
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
... preventing a person from many diseases.It is a preemptive step which should be in...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...should be incorporated by each and every individual. This argument is rife with h...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Individual
...d be incorporated by each and every individual. This argument is rife with holes and r...
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Line 6, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... routinely administered to all people in areas where the diseases was detected. T...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Areas
...inely administered to all people in areas where the diseases was detected. There ...
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Line 8, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... against cow flu would save the lives or not. The word many is also vague as ther...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Not
...nst cow flu would save the lives or not. The word many is also vague as there i...
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Line 10, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the number of people suffering from the disease. The second line claims that th...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Disease
...number of people suffering from the disease. The second line claims that there is ...
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Line 13, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sult of inoculations. This line is vague as it is not bolstered by proper researc...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: As
...of inoculations. This line is vague as it is not bolstered by proper research....
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “as” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of inoculations. This line is vague as it is not bolstered by proper research....
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Line 15, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dying because of inoculations or not. It states that there is a small possibility...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: States
... because of inoculations or not. It states that there is a small possibility of a ...
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Line 17, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...there is a possibility. In the era where technology is advancing day by day it is...
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Line 19, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...s rather than relying on unsubstantiated assumptions. The argument assumes that ...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Assumptions
...her than relying on unsubstantiated assumptions. The argument assumes that there is a ...
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Line 22, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f inoculations. On the above assumptions the author claims that he cannot permit ...
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Line 24, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: The
...culations. On the above assumptions the author claims that he cannot permit ino...
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Line 24, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xamined. It will be a big blunder if the regular administration is eschewed as mo...
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Line 26, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regular
...ed. It will be a big blunder if the regular administration is eschewed as more and ...
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Line 27, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ple could die because of inoculations. Therefore it is necessary to attach detailed repo...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 27, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ls by the disease. The above argument is not buttressed by any of the evidence an...
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Line 29, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Not
... the disease. The above argument is not buttressed by any of the evidence and r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.6327345309 148% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 2260.96107784 72% => OK
No of words: 318.0 441.139720559 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10062893082 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12837926936 2.78398813304 112% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 204.123752495 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437106918239 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 705.55239521 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0657709675 57.8364921388 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.375 119.503703932 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 23.324526521 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.70786347227 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 5.15768463074 291% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.25449101796 495% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 6.88822355289 160% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46858562998 0.218282227539 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142619750621 0.0743258471296 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13189954888 0.0701772020484 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144925847566 0.128457276422 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123452491345 0.0628817314937 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.3799401198 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.32208582834 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 98.500998004 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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