Over the last past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from the viewers were concerned with our station’s coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have just canceled their advertising contracts with us.Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level.
"news -North East West South" demands every segment and category of it to be given equal priority. but in recent times likes of people have caused a change of ideology. The claim of the argument to restore the changes made in the scheduling of the news to the formers self is based on faulty data or information that lacks the scope of the decision to be made.
The argument lacks its validity in the statement that viewers have complained over the coverage of weather and local news. it might be due to the fewer time slots allocated to these shows but is not the only reason. The contents displayed and their truthfulness is also an important factor. As the news coverage with false content or filled with rumours is likely to be questioned and ignored.
As it is evident for the argument that the shows were lat-night news programs, the
number of complaints from viewersconcernig about the news in the late-night shows only is not depicted. The complaints are just devoted the category of the programs.
As it is valid that the weather and local news could also have been aired in the other time slots of the day, more details of the viewers complaints and nature of the viewers has to provided or efforts of doing so have to be made.only with such delineate information we can make a better choice.
Moreover, consideration for the interests of the viewers is not clearly depicted in the argument.The extra time coverage of the national news should also depict various segments of the viewers according to their needs.With a survey likely to indentify the segmentation of viewers like people who prefer flash news or detailed discussions or debates over some concerning issues has to be performed to know the real reasons of the falling trps.
advertising our equally important for a channel as is its viewers. The advertising companies may retract from channels depending on the trp but trps are not the only reason. The content and reputation of the channel where the want to display the advertisements is also tantamount. As a channel frequently being subjected to the content displayed will affect the ideology of the product in the minds of the people.
For instance, if a company advertising its success on its campaign of plantation of trees is likely to receive well if it telecasted in a channel which is known to exaggerate the news it recieves.
The conclusion draws in the argument is marked by fallacious reasoning. A much detailed survey or categorization of the complaints and viewers has to be performed is any changes are about to be made in the scheduling of shows.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 448 350
No. of Characters: 2108 1500
No. of Different Words: 204 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.601 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.705 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.71 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 145 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 119 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 78 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.353 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.922 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.471 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.333 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.711 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.093 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 9 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...egory of it to be given equal priority. but in recent times likes of people have ca...
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Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...the coverage of weather and local news. it might be due to the fewer time slots al...
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Line 13, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... shows were lat-night news programs, the number of complaints from viewersconcer...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Number
...s were lat-night news programs, the number of complaints from viewersconcernig ab...
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Line 15, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t-night news programs, the number of complaints from viewersconcernig about t...
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Line 23, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...is not clearly depicted in the argument.The extra time coverage of the national new...
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Line 23, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
...of the viewers according to their needs.With a survey likely to indentify the segmen...
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Line 23, column 377, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s or debates over some concerning issues has to be performed to know the real rea...
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Line 29, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Advertising
...al reasons of the falling trps. advertising our equally important for a channel as ...
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Line 29, column 282, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the advertisements is also tantamount. As a channel frequently being subjected to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.6327345309 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 55.5748502994 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2199.0 2260.96107784 97% => OK
No of words: 446.0 441.139720559 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93049327354 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81284706814 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 204.123752495 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470852017937 0.468620217663 100% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 705.55239521 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.5478520185 57.8364921388 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.166666667 119.503703932 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 23.324526521 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27777777778 5.70786347227 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 5.15768463074 174% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282796882879 0.218282227539 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777324706179 0.0743258471296 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700982475183 0.0701772020484 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124528147692 0.128457276422 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670332860741 0.0628817314937 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.3550499002 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 98.500998004 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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