A recent sales study indicates that consumption of seafood dishes in Bay City restaurants has increased by 30 percent during the past five years. Yet there are no currently operating city restaurants whose specialty is seafood. Moreover, the majority of families in Bay City are two-income families, and a nationwide study has shown that such families eat significantly fewer home-cooked meals than they did a decade ago but at the same time express more concern about healthful eating. Therefore, the new Captain Seafood restaurant that specializes in seafood should be quite popular and profitable.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be addressed in order to decide whether the conclusion and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to the questions would help to evaluate the conclusion.
author of the aurgument claiming that there will be a good market for new Captain Seafood restaurants based on the sucess of Bay city restaurant in last five year. For supporting of claim, author using some data avilable like increse in the seafood consumption in Bay city resturants. Also, claim is based on the assumption of targeted two-income families. For finding the sucess and profitability of New CaptainS Seafood restaurant these assumption need to scrutinize properly.
Beign with the assumption made regarding increase in consumption of sea food dishes over five year. Avialable information is for last year, there may be chance that out of last five years , in first three year demands were very very high but in last year couple of years it was decreased. In this way if we subsume data of last 5 year, it seems increasing demand of seafood but actually it was decreasing in recent time.
Also, there is no clear evidence that only sea food is becoming popular in bay city restaurant. This may be case that overall popularity of City Bay resturant is increasing but cause increase in sea food consumption along with other food item of City bay resturant.
For supporting of claim author of argument is using results of some study over nationwide. No clear evidence is avialble about authonticity of the study. It was claimed that majority of families in bay city are two-income families, this data is not supported by any evidence that these families visit bay city just due to seafood of bay city. May ambient of bay city is very suitable for two member fmailies that why they visit bay city. Also, study show that two mamber families not prefer healthy food but no evidence in provieded to support that such families prefer seafood for healthy food. What if thay prefer vegetable over seafood.
In conculsion, to consider calim regarding sucess of seafood new captain resturant more evidence for assumption like prefrence of Bay city people, targeted customer. Also, latest sales study of recent year required insted of last five year.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 345 350
No. of Characters: 1673 1500
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.31 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.849 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.545 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.294 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.122 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.647 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.357 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.518 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.11 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Author
author of the aurgument claiming that there wi...
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Line 1, column 434, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this assumption' or 'these assumptions'?
Suggestion: this assumption; these assumptions
...lity of New CaptainS Seafood restaurant these assumption need to scrutinize properly. Beign wi...
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Line 2, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ay be chance that out of last five years , in first three year demands were very v...
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Line 2, column 224, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: very
...ears , in first three year demands were very very high but in last year couple of years i...
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Line 2, column 422, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ually it was decreasing in recent time. Also, there is no clear evidence that on...
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Line 8, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... new captain resturant more evidence for assumption like prefrence of Bay city pe...
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Line 8, column 172, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
...Bay city people, targeted customer. Also, latest sales study of recent year required ins...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 2260.96107784 76% => OK
No of words: 345.0 441.139720559 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9768115942 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60200532058 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 204.123752495 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469565217391 0.468620217663 100% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 705.55239521 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4259034759 57.8364921388 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 119.503703932 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 23.324526521 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94117647059 5.70786347227 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272035280692 0.218282227539 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991690916322 0.0743258471296 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594864336118 0.0701772020484 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160605095805 0.128457276422 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451344237912 0.0628817314937 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.3799401198 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 98.500998004 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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