A recent study indicates that children living in the Himalayan mountain region in Nepal have lower levels of tooth decay than children living in suburban areas in the United States, despite the fact that people in the Himalayan mountain region in Nepal receive little to no professional dental care, while people in suburban areas in the United States see a dentist an average of 1.25 times per year. Thus, regular dental care is not helpful in preventing tooth decay.
The author claims that Regular dental care is not useful in preventing tooth decay. His Argument is not honest because writer compare only two country and however one is modicum country and other one is massive country. I strongly defy with the claim and find it illogical due to the below mentioned reasons:
First argument of author is recently research shows that children living in the Himalayan mountain region in Nepal have lowly of tooth decay than children living in U.S. Perhaps Nepal children everyday take care of their tooth( their children do daily two times brushes), and U.S children not take care, and for their tooth and for eschew bad smell they are used chewing gums.
Second argument of author is folk in the Himalayan mountain region in Nepal receive little to no Professional dental care, while people in suburban area in the US. In this statement Nepal country is compare to the suburban area of the US, writer should try to compare Nepal with United States for accurate result. With ambiguous information author cannot predict the result.
Last argument of author is U.S has dentist an average of 1.25 times per year, and Nepal receive small to no professional dental care. However U.S need more dentist because U.S has a massive population than Nepal. Furthermore, regular checkup is good for our tooth because tooth decay cause slow, so if we regular checkup of 6 month period than it preventing tooth decay.
In the whole, The author argument is flaws as per mine reasons mention the above. Regular Dental care is helpful for protecting tooth decay. Because U.S has vast population than Nepal, therefore U.S need more dentist then Nepal.
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Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 --not OK
argument 3 -- not OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 287 350
No. of Characters: 1350 1500
No. of Different Words: 144 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.116 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.704 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.354 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 101 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 71 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.077 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.964 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.381 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.625 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.142 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...ldren do daily two times brushes, and U.S children not take care, and for their t...
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Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...result. Last argument of author is U.S has dentist an average of 1.25 times pe...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e small to no professional dental care. However U.S need more dentist because U.S has a...
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Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
... no professional dental care. However U.S need more dentist because U.S has a mas...
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Line 7, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...However U.S need more dentist because U.S has a massive population than Nepal. Fu...
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Line 9, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... is helpful for protecting tooth decay. Because U.S has vast population than Nepal, the...
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Line 9, column 152, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...l for protecting tooth decay. Because U.S has vast population than Nepal, therefo...
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Line 9, column 198, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...vast population than Nepal, therefore U.S need more dentist then Nepal.
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Line 9, column 218, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
... Nepal, therefore U.S need more dentist then Nepal.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 13.6137724551 15% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 55.5748502994 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 2260.96107784 62% => OK
No of words: 281.0 441.139720559 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96085409253 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28752278168 2.78398813304 82% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 204.123752495 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505338078292 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 705.55239521 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 105.546593187 57.8364921388 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 119.503703932 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 23.324526521 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 5.70786347227 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31845365366 0.218282227539 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993984933653 0.0743258471296 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101547095348 0.0701772020484 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170697070499 0.128457276422 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119517924448 0.0628817314937 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.3799401198 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.3550499002 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 98.500998004 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 12.3882235529 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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