1) Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
In this issue essay the author asserts a claim of providing financial support by the government for the major cities in order to make improvement in the cities. The author supports this claim by stating that primarily cities are the one that preserve and generate the nation’s culture.
In general, finance is the most vital part for the well being of any thing; such as well being of cities, nation, school, colleges etc. As stated by the author the government must look forward for the financial support for the cities in order to ameliorate and preserve their culture. I partially agree with this claim. This is because major cities represents the nation globally. So it is essential to provide funding for them to preserve their infrastructure, cultures, tradition, etc. But here the question arise that is financial support is all needed to preserve the culture of the nation. Also are the funding provided to the major cities are used only for preserving the culture. For ex. If funds are made available for the cities and this funding are been expended on other matters other than preserving the culture then there is no use providing financial support for the cities. Also if the cities are undergoing corruption issues then it becomes trivial to provide finance.
What is necessary is along with providing finance its mandatory for the government to keep a track of the above stated fallacies. Providing financial support will definitely help the cities to explore their culture. It will enhance more opportunities for the cities to make possible the things which are incomplete without a financial support. With financial funding for culture preservation the cities can undertake different programs related to it and also the cities can organize cultural programs so that it can propagate throughout the world.
The second claim made by the author is that the cities are the major source of culture representing the nation. Not necessarily, the cities generates the nations culture. The rural areas or village might also be the source of a particular culture which then is adopted by the cities. So in this case providing for the cities will be a major drawback.
Finally , government should take care for the funds for the cities but along with this the government should also see to it that the funds are been used for the right purpose without corruption. Also not only the cities should be provided the fund but the every factor which are the sources or the one which represents the culture of the nation should be funded in order to preserve them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...e most vital part for the well being of any thing; such as well being of cities, nation, ...
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...reserve the culture of the nation. Also are the funding provided to the major citie...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...iding financial support for the cities. Also if the cities are undergoing corruption...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ities will be a major drawback. Finally , government should take care for the fun...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he government should also see to it that the funds are been used for the right pu...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...r the right purpose without corruption. Also not only the cities should be provided ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, second, so, then, well, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96983758701 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58655049907 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.403712296984 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 677.7 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9253477171 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5238095238 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47619047619 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33997528532 0.243740707755 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134302385593 0.0831039109588 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860426535624 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237804818105 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737361390088 0.0667264976115 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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