All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
One of the most important and challenging task in parenting is to educate their children properly. A proper education at early stage most likely to have life long beneficial impact. The author of the passage recommending the parents to volunteer time their children's school. One can argue that parenting at home is enough because parents get sufficient time outside of school to spend with their kids. However, I would agree with the author suggestion here understanding the fact that by volunteering time at their children's school parents not only helping them to cope with the new environment at school but also helping the institutions in carrying out their responsibilities and themselves in parenting in numerous way.
Firstly, for the kids in Kindergarten level they go through a huge transition period. Before going to school, children mostly spend time only with their family members. But at schools suddenly they are exposed to lots of new faces and a whole new environment. Not every kids can handle this smoothly and it effects them in various way. In this transition period the best aid can come from the parents contribution. If they volunteer time to the school, the children would get a strong mental support in coping with the new world.
Additionally, it is every institution's responsibility to maintain a cooperative learning environment among the students. And if we can instill the sense of cooperation not competition among the young generation it will help them to become successful future leaders. Apparently, it seems not a difficult task but in real world humans have a inherited competitive mentality by born. It is difficult for the institutions alone to carry out the responsibility of maintaining ideal learning environment, especially for kids at early age. If parents volunteer regularly that will help a lot.
Finally, devoting time to children's school, parents themselves will be beneficial in the sense that, they will have proper idea how their children are behaving with outside world, especially compared to other same age children. They can keep a track of their physical, mental and psychological development with time and that will immensely help them in ideal parenting.
After all, from above discussion it is obvious that volunteering time at children school everybody is becoming beneficial and more importantly there is no harm when parents can manage their time. This should be a part of parenting especially the few years since their kids start attending school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...n period the best aid can come from the parents contribution. If they volunteer time to...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'institutions'' or 'institution's'?
Suggestion: institutions'; institution's
...new world. Additionally, it is every institutions responsibility to maintain a cooperativ...
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...ment, especially for kids at early age. If parents volunteer regularly that will h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2122.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 405.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23950617284 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95379652059 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493827160494 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6790532227 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214920839502 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738581033718 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609770965967 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134308726757 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059313356503 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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