All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessaary
In this world of cut-throat competition, company executives are ever more willing to spend more resources on
making their firm operate more efficiently. I believe consultants are necessary to suggest how a company can
operate better.
Consultants bring in specialized skills and expertise that might not be present in the company employees. This
skillset can allow them to look at the situation of the company holistically and analyze what the shortcomings
are and how they can be resolved. While company employees might be aware of certain problems that could be
affecting the efficiency of the company's operations, they might not have the required knowledge to propose
practical solutions to solve these.
Employees of the company are more heavily invested in the firm and might even have deep emotional connections
with their fellow colleagues. while these connections would help them work more effectively in the workplace, it
might also cloud their vision and prevent them from pointing out flaws in the working style of their colleagues
which could be hindering the company's efficiency. On the other, consultants are outside parties that can look at
the whole situation rationally and suggest solutions that are best aligned with the company's interests.
Outside consultants hired to help the company operate more efficiently would, presumably, also have worked on
similar projects for other firms. This prior experience would allow them to spot inefficiencies that would have
escaped the notice of most employees of the firm.
Although I believe that contractors would be necessary to help companies operate more efficiently, I opine that
the experience of employees in the firm is something that cannot be ignored. Employees are the ones working for
the company and dealing with clients and hence, while they might not be experts on making organizations work like
a perfect machine, they can definitely provide valuable suggestions to help the company operate better
In closing, I would like to say that consultants are definitely needed to help companies operate more
efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 328.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59756097561 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86353694632 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469512195122 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.709948393 60.3974514979 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.0 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.97078651685 402% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432819254026 0.243740707755 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190270325469 0.0831039109588 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805599606317 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145297349259 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102682509949 0.0667264976115 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.1639044944 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.