All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
In 21st century, consultancy is becoming one of most evolving area of work for the people who are very well known to thier respective fields. Counsultancy are run by counsultants which work in collaboration with different companies and industries. Counsultants suggest different ways by which companies can be operated in effecient maanner and help them to resolve different problems faced during varies business operations. It has always been a question that is it correct to follow suggestions of consultant instead of own employees.
Business and varies companies work hard and try to achieve maximum profits and increase its standards in market. When its about success of company, it is correct to take help of various external counsultant. Counsultants have extensive knowledge of their field, their advice can be very effective for betterment of company. They have discussions with respect to varies issues faced by company and give the best suggestions to solve them.
Employees of the company also have good knowledge of problems faced by company and evne listening to their suggestions can be helpful but as they are used to atmosphere and environment of the company for long time it may happen that they sre following some specific ways of thinking or resolving the problem an it may not workout and can be more time counsuming. Too explain this better we can think about schools. In primary schools, teaching method and exam patterns are generally same for many years but it is essential to change itevery generation as various changes in technology and innovation happen every year. If any school is following same syllabus or same method to teach student it may happen that knowkledge of those students will not be upto date and they will not be able to cope up with thier genertion.
It is very important to take help of consaltant as they help to operate companies in effective way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 314.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07324840764 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80048599609 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554140127389 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.48494109 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.538461538 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27857566503 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897375246264 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696191256406 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161956738906 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329147467561 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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