People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
When people are in difficult situation they have to make certain decisions they have to choose something between several options available. Decision making skill is what matters the most in such situation. Whatever decision is taken has influence on future life of that person. Hence decision making is a delicate process.
Decision making can be of many type and many factors affect this process in positive or negative manner.Emotions of any person are developed and manipulated by many social, regional and prior exposure to such situations. Decision making is art in which their are few who are skilled. There are people who take decision based on their instincts, their anticipation, their logic and knowledge including based on emotion. Emotions are volatile. For example, when we get good score in exam we are happy but the moment you realise that someone else has got more marks than you, you might feel sad.
Taking decisions based on emotions is quite risky when it comes to large scale decisions. Along with person taking the decision it has potential to target the emotion of several other people associated with it. For example, If higher authority of any organisation like school, companies and nation start taking emotion based decisions it will affect students, employees and citizens. While taking any decision is being taken on such large scale it must be based on logic, knowledge about situation. It must have valid base to be get choose. One must be able to give the justification for its decision by proving several proofs.
When working on personal levels sometimes its normal to take decisions based on emotion and being practical, rational is always good. While dealing with any situation, first you have to think logically and then about emotions, to come up with better solution.
If one is deciding something and then trying to find out the reason behind that decision, it might happen that person might come to know about negative part of his/her decision and afterwards might blame himself/ herself for bad decision.So prevention is better than cure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ecision making is a delicate process. Decision making can be of many type and ...
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... process in positive or negative manner.Emotions of any person are developed and manipul...
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...ations. Decision making is art in which their are few who are skilled. There are peop...
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... marks than you, you might feel sad. Taking decisions based on emotions is qu...
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... decision by proving several proofs. When working on personal levels sometime...
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...blame himself/ herself for bad decision.So prevention is better than cure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1081871345 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54731398188 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546783625731 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.1182911771 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0555555556 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345147527769 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11733897842 0.0831039109588 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04930871364 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186308248262 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600640662303 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.