Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
Various diseases on plant earth are dangererous to human civilization but the development in science and various research in this area has impressive results. Vaccination and medicines for various disease are available due to wide contribution of scientist. Cow disease is one of such life threathning disease which has potential to hamper lives of many people. But the inoculation against cow flu is available which can save life of various individuals.
Everytime some external element or substances are administered in the human body, it produces some action against that substance. It can be positive or negative. For example when we breath something unusual, we through it out by sneezing. Similarily, when its medicine it affects causes of disease or disorder along with affecting some parts or systems of human body. Extent to which medicine or drug affecting to human body in adverse ways depends on various factors like physical conditions, age, weight, prior exposure to medication and allergies to patients. When it comes to inoculation against cow flu same factors can be considered.
When cow flu is detected in particular area it is important to administer inoculation against cow flu as it saves lives of many people even though small number of people are dying after its administration. Because something is always better tahn nothing. Life of maximum people can be saved by its administration. When it is been said about the possibility of death after administration of inoculation, it is really essential to find the reason or cause due to which it is being fatal in those cases. It might be possible that people who are dying even after medication had major damage due to cow flu, they were sensitive to exicipients of medication, method of administration followed were wrong or had some other diseases which resulted into their death. After detailed and systematic study of these various factors, one can figur out if it should be used or not it cow flu
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 324 350
No. of Characters: 1623 1500
No. of Different Words: 174 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.243 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.009 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.844 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 113 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 93 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.183 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.375 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.329 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.478 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.084 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an save life of various individuals. Everytime some external element or subst...
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Line 3, column 569, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o medication and allergies to patients. When it comes to inoculation against cow flu...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... flu same factors can be considered. When cow flu is detected in particular a...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ple are dying after its administration. Because something is always better tahn nothing...
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Line 5, column 875, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cows'?
Suggestion: cows
...igur out if it should be used or not it cow flu
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Line 5, column 882, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t if it should be used or not it cow flu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, for example, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 2260.96107784 73% => OK
No of words: 324.0 441.139720559 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11419753086 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93214424916 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 204.123752495 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54012345679 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 705.55239521 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9523379371 57.8364921388 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5625 119.503703932 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 23.324526521 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9375 5.70786347227 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294072693431 0.218282227539 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934033016464 0.0743258471296 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871967108595 0.0701772020484 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189070078265 0.128457276422 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835647600186 0.0628817314937 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.3799401198 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.3550499002 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 98.500998004 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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