All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
Nowadays every other company hires consultants for one or the other tasks to be completed. It all depends on the company, whihc type of product it produces or services that it provides.
For example, if a company works in the field of engineering and technology, it will definitivley have to hire consultants for marketing and giving their technology based product a common mans perspective. This will ont only help them gain more customer and make their sales high. Asking the technical employees in its company for ideas wouldn't help them as they are veterans of their own tech fields and not the marketing area.
But when something related to the companys technological recommendation is concerned they must ask the ther eemployees. As they are the ones working at forefront to get the most latest and complicated job done. Here if the company hires and outside consultant it will only disrupt the working of the company by lowering the confidence of the employees and losing their trust by not valuing them who has been working in the company for years and rather asking someone who just cares about money to extract from its clients.
Similrly for a accounts based company it will have to take consultancy from the compoanies that provide proper network connections so that they can easily follow transactions that are happening simultaneously in different branchs that are located all over the world. The company here, id asks to its empoyees for recommending the best use of netwroks, all of the employees will be dumbstruck.
As we can see from the above two examples that consultants for various tasks are not completely unnecessary, but they are a crucial parts for the working of a company. Without them a sustained environement of the industries can't be maintained. By that I mean that, every other company takes consultancy from different companies who are experts in there own fields and in turn provides consultancy to those who are in need of their services. But this all happens when it is taking up services that are not the companies main objectives. When something related to changes in objectives is concerned it must always consult its employees rahter than from an outsider. And the company will get the most of the best ideas that will help it burgeon along with making there employees happy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99230769231 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7656921836 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505128205128 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.10809261 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.6875 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329841027942 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111996265833 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707125557779 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203893647245 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234373903221 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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