Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
To know about a society, one must study both the major as well as the minor cities. Every small city carries a certain culture which is not seen in larger cities and vice versa.
The major cities often get their position due to the history in which it played a very important role or because of the recent developments in moving the country forward. If it has been a part of the history then its' ancestoral values are preserved and one can get the quench his or her knowledge by visiting all the churches, museums, art gallery's and the old shops that are located all over the city. For example, the capital of Czech Republic, Prague has all the archaic buildings and various other unique and undestroyed monumets all over the city. As it was the only city which was not destroyed during both Worl Wars, it has one of the oldest buildings in Europe. So by just visiting Prague, a person can get the idea and nature of the society, nd it would not be requirted to visit other cities in the country.
But on the other side, there are various cultures that can't be understood well by just studying the major cities. For example, in Middle East, taking Saudi Arabia for instance, if a person just goes and get to know the culturem, he/she may not get to know the root of it. To know about the hoispitality and the characteristics of the culture, one must visit the deserts or the smaller cities that are are locate dfar away for the hustle and chaos of the major cities. The vast culture difference can be spotted there. The types of cloths, describing the ancient way of life, with the a slight mixture of modern technology to be updated with the world. The food and coffee containing the essence of the culture and the belief of the serving to others rather than enjoying the blessings.
Thus, in coclusion, it is more important to know the charateristics of the society through the history rather than choissing it based on recent developments of the major city.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... society, one must study both the major as well as the minor cities. Every small city carr...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...al values are preserved and one can get the quench his or her knowledge by visiting all th...
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Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r side, there are various cultures that cant be understood well by just studying the...
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Line 9, column 398, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: are
... the deserts or the smaller cities that are are locate dfar away for the hustle and cha...
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Line 9, column 581, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...escribing the ancient way of life, with the a slight mixture of modern technology to ...
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Line 9, column 653, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...echnology to be updated with the world. The food and coffee containing the essence ...
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Line 13, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...istory rather than choissing it based on recent developments of the major city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58192090395 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42524283372 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5497597386 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.857142857 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0352713939325 0.243740707755 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0116996678793 0.0831039109588 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0194126295879 0.0758088955206 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0243588614249 0.150359130593 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207610317316 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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