Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
I do not support the statement provided here that undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences must not take any courses related to Humanities as it may be not beneficial for their future careers. A small part of the statement is true, that those who are ambitious to become a sceintist or a technical engineer or accountant, they must not opt any courses which will occupy their thinking and produtive of the mind. Like for a student, who is thinking to join a Chartered Accountant academy for getting trained to become a Finanace Officer must focus on all the subjects that are related to accountancy and business. But opting a course on Human phsycology or a language course along with it will be deemed as a dumb move to succeed in the career. As it will, in no way help him/her give any knowledge about is concerned subject.
But analyzing it from a different prespective, humanities mostly provides those subject that are used to improve the interpersonal and human interaction skills. Without those a person, who may be a legend in his field, but does not know how to interact and convey his idealogy to other people, fails in succeeding in his career. As the research or any technological advancements are done for the general public and if it's not conveyed the correct way then its of no use.
So, it can not be concluded that students who are opting any subject from humanities may not be benefited. But opting it in early age or in the starting semester of their technical career, everyone must be made mandotory to take up a course that will him/her grow their human skills. This will not only give them a taste of a different subject, way far and diverse from their concerned field, but it will also give them the courageous and confident human of the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...nological advancements are done for the general public and if its not conveyed the correct way...
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Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...f its not conveyed the correct way then its of no use. So, it can not be conc...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 316.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70253164557 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71216378537 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503164556962 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8288523936 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.090909091 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7272727273 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298098684745 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120832746712 0.0831039109588 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11908733992 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193670415035 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939912339849 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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