All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
It is true that the company employees will have more valuable internal insights than an outsider. However, it is important to note that consulting companies usually have a better idea of how businesses across the globe function as a whole. The consultants are usually involved with various other businesses (both presently and in the past) and have a much deeper idea about the markets and the competition in addition to the overall state of the economics of that particular business section. Their experience and methodological approach in dealing with problems puts them in a far better position to do justice to business strategizing than anyone else in most cases.
It is often a good idea for companies to hire consultants if they don't have a strategy wing of their own. This helps the company in saving the time of their own employees who will be better off creating value for the company instead of brainstorming for strategies. The consultants can, in the mean time, develop and suggest strategies to the company executives who can choose or refute to implement these. Consultants spend a good amount of time in surveying the breadth and the depth as a part of their job which wouldn't have been possible if a company employee is entrusted with a task while they juggle with their business-as-usual task on the side.
Additionally, sometimes a bird's eye view on the company's overall goal is often lost when the employees start focussing on pedantic details. Consultants usually succeed in capturing the broader goals in this case as they are not biased by what is happening on the inside. This bigger picture and top-bottom approach often beats the bottom-up approach when it comes to devising long-term strategies.
This entire argument in the favour of outside consultants, however, only makes sense for larger firms. Business consultancy is, more often than not, associated with a steep price and it only starts making sense economically when the company that is hiring them can afford their solutions and suggestions which can create an impact that is large enough. For companies that function on a smaller scale, bottlenecks are often better identified by their own employees. In larger companies, the same is not possible owing to the scale alone. In the light of this, relying on outside consultants or not becomes a subjective argument.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...r companies to hire consultants if they dont have a strategy wing of their own. This...
^^^^
Line 5, column 516, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... the depth as a part of their job which wouldnt have been possible if a company employe...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, in addition, in most cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 389.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07969151671 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82868412216 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52442159383 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4546196791 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3125 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348811004692 0.243740707755 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118280941703 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875450896599 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204082409445 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105702958279 0.0667264976115 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.