The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.
Leaders are those who lead the team with great ambition to progress and with a zeal to succeed. Best leaders always tend to do progress and improve their methodologies according to the conditions they are put in. They seek advice from everyone and if it worth considering they will implement it for the sake of improvement. They listen to all and encourage their team members to put forward their point of view so that if there is any flaw they can supersede it with other solution. They are enthusiastic in their work and are liable to maintain the same spirit in their team.
Best leaders are the one who boasts and bolster the idea of the team members and encourages to work on the idea and provide every assistance needed. The President, Prime Ministers are the leaders of their country. They seek to take advise from the legislative council member and try to implement it for the betterment of the country. The best leaders are those who tend to progress in each and every condition setting beside the oddities.
The leaders who organize and run big companies have to listen to everyone’s point of view for their development. They encourage their employee in the organization to put forward any query and can suggest any solution so that they can improve and ameliorate themselves. The best leaders take a survey so that they can review their product and can identify the flaw in their product and thus can repair it for betterment. They treat each and every employee or team member equally and try to make equality in the team. There are various CEO’s who were successful in building their company with their leadership qualities and savvy nature. Sundar Pichai, CEO of Alphabet, is a great leader, he encourages his employees and maintains such an environment in the company that people are free to put their opinions and their viewpoint where ever necessary. Elon Musk, due to his leadership qualities, was able to build such a large company with extraordinary innovation.
In conclusion, the best leaders are those who lead their team with a ambition of progress and they seek advice and feedback from the people they are working it. They maintain harmony in their team and try every possible means to develop and flourish their team or organization. They are the one who encourages their employees to suggest without the second thought so that they can build something exemplary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...to progress and with a zeal to succeed. Best leaders always tend to do progress and ...
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Line 1, column 484, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y can supersede it with other solution. They are enthusiastic in their work and are ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...ntain the same spirit in their team. Best leaders are the one who boasts and bols...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'working'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: working
...idea of the team members and encourages to work on the idea and provide every assistanc...
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Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ders are those who lead their team with a ambition of progress and they seek advi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89486552567 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63373647335 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422982885086 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0940446318 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.368421053 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5263157895 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84210526316 5.21951772744 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327758575196 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121602202927 0.0831039109588 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10395646 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258488551914 0.150359130593 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774007508752 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.