The best way for society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
In any society, The progress of any industry or project relates with two major factors: Cooperation and competition. In given statement, The author insists to encourage the young people for cooperation in government, industry or any other fields rather than competition. I agree with the author’s statement that the cooperation in any field has more importance than competition. In the today’s world of competition it is necessary to raise the spirit of cooperation in youth.
There are several examples in any field which shows that the cooperation is crucial in progress. For Example, the progress of scientific research about space in NASA is succeeded due to cooperation. Before several decades humans have no information about the space. NASA started the space research with spirit of cooperation. If the scientists only think about their individual success by competition with each other than they could not do the major discoveries about space. It shows the major importance of cooperation in any field of development.
There are several other fields in which cooperation with other members are mandatory for victory. Consider the example of football game. In game like football it is necessary to work in team as a whole rather than individual. If the player of team tries to compete with other than the whole team can’t win. They have to work together to achieve the goal.
It is possible that the individual’s idea can be great and that idea can do the revolutionary effect in field, but without support of entire team the idea of individual can never achieve success. In the developing filed like Computer science and businesses related to them, the cooperation has major effect on development. The company like Microsoft is developed by the idea of the individual person Bill Gates, but entire team of Microsoft worked on that idea. Therefore, The Microsoft had become the major hub for developing the computer related software.
However, there is also importance of competition in any field to maintain its position among the other competitors. For example, Apple company has developed standard mobile phones with which other could not compete. But then Samsung started to develop the phones, today Samsung is giving great competition to Apple. But that does not mean competition is everything. Even Samsung and apple are competitors, but the integrated chips made by Samsung are used in apple mobile phones. So, Apple is the biggest customer of Samsung. Therefore, in competition between two companies, cooperation is necessary to development.
In conclusion, I would like to conclude that in each field competition have some importance in success, but the cooperation has major impact on success of any industry, government or any other field. Therefore, any society must prepare its young generation for cooperation in any field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 38.0 12.9106741573 294% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2416.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28665207877 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96589407006 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428884026258 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 779.4 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8231421797 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2857142857 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3214285714 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53571428571 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198706768477 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568059861901 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793647934216 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108509167502 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543128437766 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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