Claim: Colleges and universities should specify all required courses and eliminate elective courses in order to provide clear guidance for students.
Reason: College students — like people in general — prefer to follow directions rather than make their own decisions.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Subject choice is one of the vital event for a student during his or her college and university admission. Students are always encourage to follow their interests and talents to choose their feild of studies at the time of admission. The prompt claims that colleges and universities should specify all required courses and eliminate elective courses in order to provide clear guidance because general college students prefer to follow directions rather that make their own decisions. I strongly agree with the claim, but I cannot accede to the reason.
Firstly, elective subjects are the wastage of time for most of the college and university students. College and university are the educational institutions, where students choose a particular subjects mostly depending on their own choice for a comprehensive study on that subject particularly. An elective subject generally an irrelevant course from a particular field often cause to wastage of time for a student. For example, an course on English literature is offered to Chemical engineering students as elective subject. An engineering student may not be interested in literature, so to pass in that elective subject he or she need to give extra effort, which will cause time waste for that student. Sometimes, student fail in elective courses, in that case, the student need extra semester to pass in that subeject. The examples shows us that elective subjects hamper the students regular academic life and become a reason for extra time.
Moreover, to complete a elective course a student need to pay some money, and this causes wastege of money for the students. For example, in a semester, if a student need to take an elective course, then in that semester the student should pay tution fee for that course. Students are not interested in the offered elective course, even though to complete the credit they need to take the courses. Whenever a student enroll a subject, he or she need to pay for that. Therefore, elective courses couse a student in superfluous payment.
Finally, students are independent to choose their field of study during admission of college and university. Sometimes, students choose subjects on the basis of job market, still it is the students choice. Therefore, a student neve encourage to follow a particular direction rather it is preferred to follow their own choice.
In conclusion, elective subject can enhance the student's knowledge; however, those elective subjects most of the time prclude students to their graduation. Therefore, colleges and universities should eliminate elective subjects to make the students life more easier.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraged
...iversity admission. Students are always encourage to follow their interests and talents t...
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Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'following'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: following
...dmission. Students are always encourage to follow their interests and talents to choose t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...age of time for a student. For example, an course on English literature is offered...
^^
Line 3, column 835, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'show'.
Suggestion: show
... to pass in that subeject. The examples shows us that elective subjects hamper the st...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...or extra time. Moreover, to complete a elective course a student need to pay s...
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Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'following'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: following
...ce. Therefore, a student neve encourage to follow a particular direction rather it is pre...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 49, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...usion, elective subject can enhance the students knowledge; however, those elective subj...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 241, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...eliminate elective subjects to make the students life more easier.
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Line 9, column 255, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...tive subjects to make the students life more easier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 420.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78868787163 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438095238095 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 719.1 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9211007108 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476688207817 0.243740707755 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174328390353 0.0831039109588 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141346683953 0.0758088955206 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315995950582 0.150359130593 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148492280615 0.0667264976115 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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