Claim: Colleges and universities should specify all required courses and eliminate elective courses in order to provide clear guidance for students.
Reason: College students—like people in general—prefer to follow directions rather than make their own decisions.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The claim suggested that Colleges should give specification on each subject of the course and abate elective subjects in order to provide clear guidance for students.And reason behind this is because individuals follow foot steps as per order rather than taking their own decisions. In my openion, it is necessary to permit students to choose their path according to their goals inspite of bordonsome them with fixed criteria during acedmics.
Clear guidence means to make one aware about what is good or bad for there future related to the choice. Therefore, universities specify all required courses to give push to carrier and imeded feeling of enthusiasm. In contrast, elective courses ought to be hinder. Since, students sometimes have little intrest and universities while making rigid decision give more pressure on students to forcefully learn those. In acedamics each have there own desired path to walk on.So, the decision must be taken by the person who actually put efforts in making all desires true.
On the other hand, It may have some negative impacts as well. There may be a chances that student unable to decide their choice of course make mistake by taking wrong choice and later realized when it can not be change.Where as, when one limited by some already taken decisions it later can help in forthcoming future. To exemplify, in early times of graduation in indian colleges student forced to learn all subjects from different field to bring their interest out untill next 6 months. It is appreciable and benefited student in all way.Althogh sometimes it create hurdles in minds where they have to invest time and efforts which is according to students are unnecessary.
However, propose changes such as introducing carrier councilors at each college or university will be brilliant idea where experienced tutors help students in taking carrier choices.Then, student get clear idea of does and don't. Recently, In india this proposed change has created dramatically change by giving carrier councilor to students .THis eliminate hesitation and anxiety of student before taking any decisions.There purpose is to sort out student confusion and let them feel more confident about there taken choice. Which ultimately ended up student wasting time in taking decisions and give clear thought.
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...aking decisions and give clear thought.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in contrast, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26756756757 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67797471527 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591891891892 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8220257698 60.3974514979 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.214285714 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.21951772744 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31678171714 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099266608703 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883753232215 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191643195862 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954292016068 0.0667264976115 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.