Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
it is being claimed that government should provide necessary financial support to major cities to make them able to progress and continue to do so.it is stated that the reason for this is these major cities are those where nation's cultural traditions are being preserved and generated.this reason can be interpreted because nation's reputation is majorly dependent upon such major cities.
I mostly disagree with the reason given because major cities are those where major businesses are running like in India cities like Bangalore,Pune,Chennai etc are popular for large number of it companies and because of this their contribution in nation's progress is major.Not only it companies but there are many different textile,petroleum etc industries which are responsible for nation's progress.To maintain nation's GDP it is required that these businesses must run smoothly or face less loss.it does not matter whether that city follows or maintains cultural traditions.So to do good progress in respective industries
government is ought to provide financial support to them.
The claim also does not justify itself as it suggests that for a particular city to make progress only financial support is enough which is very partial claim as for a particular city to make progress only financial support is not enough though it is more important but legal support is also required.Sometimes it is necessary for a business to lessen the restrictions regarding laws to enable that business
to make progress without any hurdles and sometimes it can be needed to make some strict laws to protect the businesses.Government can provide support in different forms like providing electricity,required things at lower cost,transportation etc.
Finally,there are some businesses which are running in small cities but are contributing majorly towards our nation's progress.So the claim also fails to include those cities.Small cities like Bhopal,Kanpur etc are very important very different businesses which are important part of our country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, regarding, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 311.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53697749196 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38509624124 2.79657885939 121% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479099678457 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 23.0359550562 334% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 167.221970745 60.3974514979 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 430.5 118.986275619 362% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.75 23.4991977007 331% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.21951772744 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302387839838 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200628788547 0.0831039109588 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841245906438 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161695214115 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852694575984 0.0667264976115 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.5 14.1392134831 308% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.6 48.8420337079 -48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.7 12.1743820225 293% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.04 12.1639044944 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.38706741573 128% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 11.2143820225 292% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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