Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.Write a response in which you discuss the e

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Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.

Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.

The claim made by the statment pertinent to government attention and aid the major cities required in order to develop and thrive is totally agreeable. However, the reason for the claim sounds unwarrented. According to the author, cities are the primary source of a country’s cultural traditions and it is the place where they can be preserved.

Cities growth is certainly the foundation for the development of any nation. It is the cities of the country which represents it in the world, they are the face of the nation. For example - United States is recognized from the lifestyle of New York, WahingtonDC, India by New Delhi, Mumbai and so on. Major cities are the primary contributor to economical growth and are political hub for the nation. Nevertheless, accrediting cities as the primary source of cultural traditions is apocryphal.

Undoubtedly, there are developed countries like Germany, France whose major cities are primarily the source and symbol of country’s tradition and lifestyle. Still, the reason can not be generalized. There are developing countries like India, Nepal, Brazil, where rural areas and villages forms the integral part of the country’s culture. Infact, for a developing countries like India, where cities are more industrialized, are marked by mechanical lifestyle with jejune culture. It is rich rural lifestyle that characterizes it’s culture.

In addition, rural economy comprises a major percentage of such nation’s employment. Agriculture and Farming are contributes to about 50% to GDP and per capita income. The rural economy plays equally vital role in these nation’s growth. The primary and secondary occupations are essentially foundation for the teritary level, and therefore need financial support and attention from the government.

In conclusion, it is no brainer that goverment should ensure that cities get good financial support to thrive and burgeon economically, politically and socially to ensure country’s growth. At the same time, there are developing countries whose soul still exists in villages. Government, therefore should ensure that those areas play an equal and vital role in contributing to the cointry’s growth by continuous support and attention.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275119617225 0.240241500013 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.126794258373 0.157235817809 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107655502392 0.0880659088768 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0430622009569 0.0497285424764 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0191387559809 0.0444667217837 43% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0956937799043 0.12292977631 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0263157894737 0.0406280797675 65% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.14680863897 2.79330140395 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0215311004785 0.030933414821 70% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0885167464115 0.0997080785238 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00956937799043 0.0249443105267 38% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0167464114833 0.0148568991511 113% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2261.0 2732.02544248 83% => OK
No of words: 343.0 452.878318584 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.59183673469 6.0361032391 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.446064139942 0.366273622748 122% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.326530612245 0.280924506359 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.250728862974 0.200843997647 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.212827988338 0.132149295362 161% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14680863897 2.79330140395 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 219.290929204 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507288629738 0.48968727796 104% => OK
Word variations: 53.0795244114 55.4138127331 96% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.15 23.380412469 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7127078958 59.4972553346 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.05 141.124799967 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.15 23.380412469 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.674092028746 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 49.8030612245 51.4728631049 97% => OK
Elegance: 2.10126582278 1.64882698954 127% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.489348954973 0.391690518653 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10755181651 0.123202303941 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0904054194312 0.077325440228 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.559596464018 0.547984918172 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162652095867 0.149214159877 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184612137915 0.161403998019 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863489152065 0.0892212321368 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.404267856577 0.385218514788 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.127947674579 0.0692045440612 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323988019805 0.275328986314 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717523742617 0.0653680567796 110% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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