Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
The author contends that the big cities of the nation must get the desired capital and the the financial support by the government
and the political party must ensure this. Author has also given a reason on which his claim is based which states that its majorly in cities that the nation's
cultural heritage is preserved and generated. I completely agree with the assertion as I strongly believe if cities bloom well with the support of the government,
it brings various advantages to its country. My opinion has been explicated in detail below.
Firstly, finance is something which is a prerequisite for the growth of almost everything. Talk about an individuals, sources of entertainment, any new products,
villages, cities and more. But various reasons can be listed on why the government should invest in cities and make sure capital aids are dispensed for the cities
to flourish. Starting with the primary reason that cities are the representatives of a country. Any foreign dignitaries land in the big city of the country which
is connected to rest of the world. Now imagine a situation where the airport of a country is shabby and lacks the basic amenities like clean toilet.
The first image created by those elites and the memory that they carry with them is not going to be a good one. There will be some damage caused to the
reputation of the country.Hence, government should take care and spend judiciously on the civic amenities and other areas of development in the big cities.
Secondly, elaborating the author's view that nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated in these cities existing from ages. Illustrating this with an example of
my own country India, New Delhi is the heart of the nation and has been the capital of the country since mughal were ruling which is hundreds of decades ago. As these
city is old, it has myriad of forts, palaces, gardens preserved in the form of museums or highly maintained modern day tourist restaurants. Agra,another major cities
has one of the seven wonders of the world that is "Taj Mehal". Maintenance of these beautiful monuments is only possible when the government takes care of these by
investing finances for their cleaning, repairs etc.
Another benefit that a country will receive on investing in cities is the revenue generated by these cities. Once a city looks appealing, it attracts a lot of tourists
to the country which would help the restaurants, the museums, the hotels, the small vendors who sell handmade artifacts and even the local transports. Moreover
the gifts that cultural exchanges bring in terms of personal and national growth are numerous.
Therefore, needless to say the government must spend on the cities of their nation of a better growth of the country, monetarily and personality. Apart from that, new
areas of employment open abundant of opportunities once outsiders are willing to establish a business in the cities with good facilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2502.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 491.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09572301426 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7669056993 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52749490835 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 771.3 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7675328606 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.727272727 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3181818182 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68181818182 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.97078651685 402% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331260751063 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891985881833 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780887658382 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921290800756 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817587066089 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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