Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
The author states here that in many situation laws and order can not solve the problems, because it can not change the feeling of people. Indisputably, there are many cases in which judicial system have let down people's hope. Nevertheless, laws and legal system states that everyone has equal rights for justice; and in most of cases judicial system has proved judicial equality. Thus, I generally disagree with the statement that problems can not be solved by law and order, and I would like to argue that people's feeling does not define law and order, but constitution does.
First of all, any country is defined by its law and legal systems. Country's situation is mirror of how strong its legal system is and how persuasively it applied on the system. What is work of law and order? Law and legal system make sure that every inhabitant of country is safe and have equal justice right. Sometimes, there are many cases in which for lack of evidence the reprehensible is vindicated. But, that is what our constitution is. It explicitly states that everyone got equal chance of parity.
Moreover, in modern society there are many crimes which are never occurred before are happening; and for that there are not any law defined yet. So, sometimes criminal is exculpated. That does not mean that our system is not capable giving justification. But, if there are appropriate laws are defined by our system, then it would not have been happened. That does not mean that our system is not capable giving justification. But to take the situation in our hand is not justice to both country and the criminal.
However, there are many situation that our constitution can not solved. For example, the Mumbai attack that happened on 26/11 , one terrorist caught alive by the police. But, still he was kept alive for more than 2 years. On that time feelings of people get hurt. And like endless many cases are there for example; Rape, murder,. In this cases the criminal is not hung to death. So, for safety of people law and legal system must be updated with the time and should tighten the screw on criminals.
In sum, there are endless many cases in which reprehensible is exculpated for lake of evidence and people's safety is put in danger, but law and legal system are working for citizen of country. So, people should have faith on their constitution. And also judicial system have to update with the time and make sure that all the cases got to the matter of legal system are justified.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The author states here that in many situ...
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Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the cases') or simply say ''most cases''.
Suggestion: most of the cases; most cases
...ne has equal rights for justice; and in most of cases judicial system has proved judicial equ...
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Line 4, column 21, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun situation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many situations'.
Suggestion: many situations
... and the criminal. However, there are many situation that our constitution can not solved. F...
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Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'situations'?
Suggestion: situations
...the criminal. However, there are many situation that our constitution can not solved. F...
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Line 4, column 66, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'solve'
Suggestion: solve
...situation that our constitution can not solved. For example, the Mumbai attack that ha...
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Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the Mumbai attack that happened on 26/11 , one terrorist caught alive by the polic...
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Suggestion: , .
...ases are there for example; Rape, murder,. In this cases the criminal is not hung ...
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Line 4, column 334, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...re there for example; Rape, murder,. In this cases the criminal is not hung to death...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'thus', 'for example', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22633744856 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.183127572016 0.157235817809 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0740740740741 0.0880659088768 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0720164609053 0.0497285424764 145% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0329218106996 0.0444667217837 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121399176955 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0473251028807 0.0406280797675 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46441793799 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0123456790123 0.030933414821 40% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00205761316872 0.0016655270985 124% => OK
Determiners: 0.0534979423868 0.0997080785238 54% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0185185185185 0.0249443105267 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0185185185185 0.0148568991511 125% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2493.0 2732.02544248 91% => OK
No of words: 434.0 452.878318584 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74423963134 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308755760369 0.366273622748 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.202764976959 0.280924506359 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.13133640553 0.200843997647 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0783410138249 0.132149295362 59% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46441793799 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 219.290929204 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.48968727796 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.4992562081 55.4138127331 84% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6194690265 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0740740741 23.380412469 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9047765552 59.4972553346 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 141.124799967 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0740740741 23.380412469 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.481481481481 0.674092028746 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 36.3505717699 51.4728631049 71% => OK
Elegance: 1.37142857143 1.64882698954 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300931546401 0.391690518653 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0930123917964 0.123202303941 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.069794229384 0.077325440228 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.467027391827 0.547984918172 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147946706755 0.149214159877 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105672592586 0.161403998019 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588385865685 0.0892212321368 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.375546697954 0.385218514788 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0644080338151 0.0692045440612 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21134219255 0.275328986314 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486240294343 0.0653680567796 74% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.30420353982 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 3.66592920354 246% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.5995575221 162% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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