Claim: In order to help small businesses thrive, government should play a minimal role in private business matters.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The claim states that in order for small businesses to thrive, government should play a minimal role in private business matter. I agree with this claim as I believe that in order for small businesses to thrive, they need to be able to explore on their own without excessive government interference. The following points will give a clearer idea of my stance.
If it's a small business then it is obviously something that been started locally and the scope of the business is quite limited. So it afftects a lesser number of people. And if this is the case, then I believe that government intervention should be as little as possible because these businesses are as it is running on minimal profits and minimal resources. On top of that, if we were to include the excessive gorvernment involvement then that would just add to the already long list of challenges that the small businesses face.
If the government rules and regulations for small businesses are very constricting, then there will be no room for these businesses to find their footing and to thrive. They will have no room to explore various avenues in their respective businesses and that may lead to discouragement of people wishing to start new businesses. For example if the government puts a restriction on the selling price of a certain product and the rule states that the product not be sold for more than the maximum allowed price, then the small businesses that manufacture/sell that product might find themselves in a difficult situation. As we all know, that any item, when mass produced, will cost lower than when the production scale is smaller. Since the small businesses will obviously have a smaller productions, they are as it is not making as much profit as the mass producers and on top of that if the restriction on the price is imposed, then to meet the government demands as well to make a profit in the business, the small business owners might be forced to compromise on the quality of the product. And obviously buyers will give preference to quality when the two similar prducts are available at the same price. This may end up as a very huge disadvantage to the small businesses.
Although, I have to agree that government involvement can at times prove to be beneficial for small businesses when the government guidelines and rules and regulations prove beneficial to not only the businesses but also to the people. Like in the above example given, if the said product was a basic necessity product like cold medicine then the restriction may even prove useful as even the business is small, it cannot outrageously price something as common as cold medicine which is also a health necessity.
Thus I agree that in some necessary situations, government involvement can be necessary but majorly in order to help small businesses to thrive, government should play a minimal as far as possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 4, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...give a clearer idea of my stance. If its a small business then it is obviously s...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ne which is also a health necessity. Thus I agree that in some necessary situatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, thus, well, for example, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2404.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 493.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87626774848 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84855778989 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425963488844 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 764.1 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.1525466884 60.3974514979 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.411764706 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306209621345 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113065100694 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120707534771 0.0758088955206 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215566341538 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998513467223 0.0667264976115 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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