Claim: Researchers should not limit their investigations to only those areas in which they expect to discover something that has an immediate, practical application.
Reason: It is impossible to predict the outcome of a line of research with any certainty.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
It is correctly contended in the claim that researchers should not limit their investigations strictly to the area in which they are expecting to discover something that has immediate practical application. A holistic approach towards research is highly likely to produce extraordinary products and inventions, which will be essential for society. The reason provided states that outcome is impossible to predict, but with enough research already done in any field, one can surely get insight about what to expect; however, it does not clearly expound the main basis of the claim. Today's era has highly connected streams of research, and an innovation in one field might add new dimensions to other as well.
Currently, research areas have been highly intermixed, over the time it has fused into one another. To clearly claim that a development in a field will affect only that field is fatuous. In the past, research topics were highly secluded and there were sporadic fields in which one could study, but contemporary research is a mixture of different areas altogether. For e.g., in earlier days, there used to be different specific departments of chemical, materials, biotechnology and nanotechnology; but recently these areas have fused together and a breakthrough in one field affects another.
The prime focus of social networking sites was to connect people to the internet, but over the years it has found application in every aspect of society. People are not only connecting for socializing but also for doing business. Stand-up comedians for whom it was difficult to show their talent at large scale are finding this platform highly effective to penetrate across religion, caste, race, ethnicity and demography. Advertisement business has seen new height due to the advent of social networking and people choice to use online platform for business. A tool which started for developing basic connection among students of a college now holds the biggest audience for any cause.
In the past, several types of research whose main target was to benefit defense sector, when subjected in the purview of a larger audience , proved highly effective for another usage as well. The advent of the internet, wireless, GPS, and much more were strictly used by army personnel; it slowly swept into common masses in the form of telephone, mobile, wireless, location tracking etc. It is true that it’s very difficult to predict the outcome of any research and keeping a multifarious approach toward research is always important.
Conclusively, one should not be myopic in looking beyond the scope of their designated field, but several inspirations and parallels can be drawn from the collective approach in finding the solution of humanities' main concerns. Medical field and Engineering were supposed to be two different sects, but today these societies work hand in hand in order to achieve eradicate deadly diseases and propel easier treatments.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'e.g.', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248091603053 0.240241500013 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.154580152672 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101145038168 0.0880659088768 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0648854961832 0.0497285424764 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0229007633588 0.0444667217837 52% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112595419847 0.12292977631 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0477099236641 0.0406280797675 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81786651701 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0343511450382 0.030933414821 111% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0782442748092 0.0997080785238 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0152671755725 0.0249443105267 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0171755725191 0.0148568991511 116% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2986.0 2732.02544248 109% => OK
No of words: 471.0 452.878318584 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.33970276008 6.0361032391 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.414012738854 0.366273622748 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.307855626327 0.280924506359 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.237791932059 0.200843997647 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.150743099788 0.132149295362 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81786651701 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 219.290929204 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55838641189 0.48968727796 114% => OK
Word variations: 68.042218971 55.4138127331 123% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.1666666667 23.380412469 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7174037148 59.4972553346 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.888888889 141.124799967 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 23.380412469 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.674092028746 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.21349557522 249% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 56.9522292994 51.4728631049 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.68503937008 1.64882698954 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.499641815509 0.391690518653 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0889408854683 0.123202303941 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0405881048692 0.077325440228 52% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.547510528684 0.547984918172 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116628640534 0.149214159877 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183159216969 0.161403998019 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116847216899 0.0892212321368 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.303178949465 0.385218514788 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0751853782253 0.0692045440612 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309036746509 0.275328986314 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139455117203 0.0653680567796 213% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88274336283 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.70907079646 332% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.