Claim:In order to help small business thrive, government should play a minimal role in private business matters.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
This topic raises the controversial issue of whether the government should play a minimal role in private business. Indisputably, this will burgeon the illegal practices. Nevertheless, this will provide more opportunities to freely grow to the small organizations.Thus, I generally disagree with the opinion that government should play a major role in private business affairs and would agree that it must portray a minor role.
First of all, the less indulgence of government in private business affairs, will give the small business or startups the environment of no hindrance. I would like to point out that this will give them open and free environment to flourish.To illustrate this, let us take an example of a naive learning to ride a bicycle. In this circumstance, obviously the child will not become capable enough to ride bicycle unless the parents set them free and retract their support. Likewise, it is petty obvious that the bird will fly high when set free rather than captured in cage.
Furthermore, the freedom will save the businesses from the excruciating task of seeking approvals, adhering to laws,thus saving their precious time and meager resources. specifically the bribe taken by some venal government officials. To make the point lucid, think of a startup,still in its rudimentary stage, recently got a seed funding, have less manpower and which want to spread its business in all the major cities of the country but is not able to do so due to the dilatory and cumbersome government approvals and thus depleting its resources. To circumvent the problem, the startup is prone to corrupt the government authority and having less fund to expand the business.
Admittedly, the lack of control will engender illicit and unscrupulous practices and several breaches of the laws. This is true especially when it comes to the business which affects the more number of people like civil engineering firms, if the government does nor impose some rules to follow some standards, this will culminate into poor quality bridges and roads, risking thousand of lives travelling daily on those bridge.However,the above argument does not constitute a sufficient support to claim that government should control each and every aspect of the businesses. Because doing so, they will preclude the growth of such organizations. Instead they should control only the important areas like quality and safety and rest give freedom in the rest aspects.
In conclusion, although the diminished role of government anticipates unruly behavior of the firm, the minimal involvement of government ensures the growth of the firms and ultimately people. As long as some measurements are performed or some areas are involved, the minimal role of government in private business affairs help the small business. In fact, the firms can apply some innovative and economical practices, paragon in the industry.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... freely grow to the small organizations.Thus, I generally disagree with the opinion ...
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...eir precious time and meager resources. specifically the bribe taken by some venal governmen...
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...make the point lucid, think of a startup,still in its rudimentary stage, recently got ...
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...poor quality bridges and roads, risking thousand of lives travelling daily on those brid...
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... lives travelling daily on those bridge.However,the above argument does not constitute ...
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...travelling daily on those bridge.However,the above argument does not constitute a su...
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...constitute a sufficient support to claim that government should control each and ...
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Suggestion: Instead,
...clude the growth of such organizations. Instead they should control only the important ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, still, thus, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2455.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 462.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31385281385 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9694918713 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554112554113 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 758.7 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.5413779388 60.3974514979 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.388888889 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208481433448 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060626370923 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693090736599 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117721727779 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542118314458 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.1392134831 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.