College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position
it is not eccentric to debate that in the world, we live, selecting the appropriate subject of the study is a controversial issue among people. While some people think that students’ interests are more important than career positions in term so their study fields. Others believe that students had better pay attention to the availability of a job when choosing the college subject is a logical issue.in my view, I mostly agree with the latest statements because of two reasons.
First of all, pay attention to the availability of jobs when choosing a study filed is an essential way to plan for having a successful life in the future. That is, every person requires to access the basic needs such as foods, house, cars, etc., and these needs could not be prepared without access to the jobs. In fact, without having jobs, everybody could deter from perfect life and be eager to get his needs by doing wrong actions such as theft, robbery, and. Also, by getting jobs student will be able to get married in the future. That is, Marriage is the essential steps in people developments and is it logical to expect that students get married and supports theirs without having enough money? That is marital status plays undeniable roles in people’s health and social status. For instance, people who get married have less stress as compared with single as they are supported by their family members in difficult situations.
Further, considering jobs position when selecting the fields study will be helpful to have a better quality of life in the future. To clarify this points, based on MAZLO pyramid needs, without accessing the life's basic needs such as foods, house, experiencing top needs like happiness and loyalty, participation in social activity, religious will be impossible. This type of experience has an important role in people quality of lives. For instance, without having the jobs, that bring the money, people will be sad, and cannot play an effective role in the community. Besides, the quality of life is determined by the people well-being experience. That is, without having the career peoples’ self- esteems will decrease. For instance, Malcom IX who was the pioneer in the among Africa-American Muslim community told that he because of financial problems which were originated from lacks of jobs opportunity for the Black in the USA, he had to suffer various kinds of insulting from other peoples. In fact, without having high self-esteem it is difficult to have a better quality of life.
Although, students should pay attention to the jobs opportunity when they choose their study field, regarding their interest, is also an important issue. Since without being passionate about study subjects, the student may give up their study filed in the future.
In brief, while some people think that student had better pay attention to other items instead of jobs availability when selecting their student subject, I disagree with this is ides because of the importance of jobs in creating successful and high-quality life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is not eccentric to debate that in the ...
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Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'accessing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: accessing
... future. That is, every person requires to access the basic needs such as foods, house, c...
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Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'jobs'' or 'job's'?
Suggestion: jobs'; job's
...h, students should pay attention to the jobs opportunity when they choose their stud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, in brief, in fact, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2556.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 502.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09163346614 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67920214929 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488047808765 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 782.1 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.38483146067 319% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1682991019 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.714285714 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9047619048 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95238095238 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182405732891 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575284459892 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497442618831 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124739153405 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425720790308 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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