Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The recommendation presents a view that I would like to agree with is credible in most of the situations but the thing which I do not agree is the " all or nothing " impression that it gives. The veterans of any field provide a view-point which plays a categorical role in analyzing any work or situation. Although, there are some situations where judgement could be done easily without any such absolute view points. In such situations majority view-point holds a prominent role in analyzing the situation.
The argument will obviously pay its dividends to the situations where virtuoso's hold a very salient role. For example, in the medical field, most of the times when emergency comes or a complicated case is seen, only the seasoned doctors are trusted and there suggestions and guidance holds an absolute role over any other doctor. every patient wants to get treated by the best doctors and want to get prescribed by them. Therefore, in such situations experience and knowledge of experts play a very significant role.
To expand on this point, I would like to put emphasis on the situations when decisive decisions are to be taken which hold a power of impacting millions of people's well-being. also, in situations where a nation's economy has to be evaluated, veterans opinion is very important. For example, to analyze the pros and cons of recently stablished law of demonitazation and GST, many ordinary people wanted to know the experts opinion because they could give a credible analysis of it based on facts and evidences. They could reflect upon it objectively and make it lucid for everyone who is still confused about its objective.
Likewise in army also many of the strong decisions and analysis has to be done by the generals since they have already been through such wars in their fledgling years and now there experience could be used in analysing any situation and hence, making a profitable plan.
I do support the idea that this claim posits, however, there are some exceptions also because of which I do not think that it is judicious to think that every time expert analysis is correct and viable. For example, most of the times it is seen that critics when analyze any movie or give their judgement to it is not always right. it is seen that even when the movie has got a below average ratings by the critics, it is accepted by the normal people in a very large scale and end up doing great business. they analyze movies on the basis of acting, screenplay, story and many such intrinsic qualities, but sometimes they cannot predict or evaluate the impact that a normal movie could also give.
Clearly, veterans point of view is seen as a formidable and serious view-point. And in most of the fields they hold a very prominent position because of their experience and knowledge about the already prevailing rules and regulations in that field . however, there are some situations where expert opinion could be proved wrong or could be superseded by the majority decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, likewise, so, still, therefore, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2504.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 514.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87159533074 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67081996607 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470817120623 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 810.9 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7922211632 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.2 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111495571018 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360592490767 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448534537899 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584749344601 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332495201332 0.0667264976115 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.