Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In this topic,we are discussing the function about educational institutions on the way of students to their own success. I partly disagree the statement that schools where people get various kinds of training or guiding should persuade them not to chase for the dream unlike to archive. We go to colleges or universities even primary school to cultivate ourselves, whose purpose is to make our life better, make our society better, make out world better.There different criterion of success and differen kinds of schools,so it's improper to make such conclusion that you should only run after which you can master.
Maybe someone get question like this,you cannot learn math if you are not good at it.While it depends on which grade you are in.In the primary school,one cannot give up learning calculating unless he or she want to quit exam, in the universities, however, students in art school can escape the math course,because they don't have to.Likewise, almost every adlut can drvie while this ability is not inborn but acquired by learnning.No body in the driving-training center tell you should not learn if you cannot at first.
Moreover, whether the educational institutions ,some one also asked, are obliged to tell students you need to learn something and quit something you are unlikely to learn. The answer, I believe, is unecessary. if you told Liu Xiang, first asian athelete runner who won the olympice gold medal, the whole asian cannot compete with african runners on the athlete field, he could not chose the life as being a runner,and the record that the african runner will conquer the athelete will go on."Nothing is impossible", the famous addidas slogan, inspire people to chase dream and never give up.
On the other hand,I assume that people,especially normal adults have the self-consicence what they are good at.Indeed,It is a hard cousre for people who can not type to learn computer science.So the study of certain field is one's own choice. even if they could not master in the begginning.life is a box of chocaolate, says forest gum's mother, you can never know what you can get.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 351.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09401709402 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91316357676 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595441595442 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.916016087 60.3974514979 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.666666667 118.986275619 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 23.4991977007 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.21951772744 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 7.80617977528 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209136078348 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788135558198 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467573676748 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118674540212 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171701007526 0.0667264976115 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 14.1392134831 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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