Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The issue of the topic whether one must study the major cities to understand the characteristics of the society is a contentious one. While each side has its strength and weakness , I believe that that the one must not solely focus his study on the major cities to know the most important characteristics of the society. Furthermost, one's study shouldnot be the stereotype to judge all the countryside towns and villages based on the city oriented study. Moreover, he should judge carefully that today's society in city area has more or same scenario all over the world, where people move to city in search of basic facilities, jobs and the career. Firstly, I believe that city solely does not describe the social characterics of the entire study area. Major cities are composed of basic facilities where people from different socities gather at a place in search of jobs. For example, Kathmandu city where people from different socities live there, one should not judge the countryside village characteristics based on Kathmandu. Similarly the Mumbai city of India is majorly famous for the bollywood charms but this city doesnot represent the entire social characteristics of other countryside. Another reason for my belief is that today's dynamic world is that people from different country and society lives on major city. We can see on todays diverse world that the marriage between the diverge society-muslims and the Hindus are easily accepted on major cities, which is basically not accepted on the South Asian countries on the village side. Some may argue that major cities contain the most important characteristics where Kingdom was present in the major old cities in the past, there may be most important characteristics. But on the todays dynamic world as I mentioned earlier that all major cities all over the the world have more or less the same characteristics . On Conclusion, one must not understand the society features based on the major cities. For these reasons mentioned above, one must not study only the major cities to understand the most important characteristics of a society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... each side has its strength and weakness , I believe that that the one must not so...
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Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...s its strength and weakness , I believe that that the one must not solely focus his study...
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Line 1, column 497, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...oreover, he should judge carefully that todays society in city area has more or same s...
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Line 1, column 1031, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...age characteristics based on Kathmandu. Similarly the Mumbai city of India is majorly fam...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...diverse world that the marriage between the diverge society-muslims and the Hindus are easi...
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Line 1, column 1558, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...countries on the village side. Some may argue that major cities contain the most impo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... earlier that all major cities all over the the world have more or less the same charac...
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Line 1, column 1819, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... earlier that all major cities all over the the world have more or less the same charac...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ve more or less the same characteristics . On Conclusion, one must not understand ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, while, for example, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 345.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08985507246 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86875702664 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469565217391 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9626365064 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 125.428571429 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0369610464358 0.243740707755 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0171569110555 0.0831039109588 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0135027407457 0.0758088955206 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0369610464358 0.150359130593 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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